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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person bakachibi_voidfox
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nooo...malik! poor thing..oh...some one call the hospital, we have a sick hikari here. good chappy great_bakurasgirl
cant wait to find out what happens
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O Malik no! *i hug him* I can't say I blame him but still! *cries* How could you make him do that?!?
person Lady Elfskye
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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*squeezes Malik plushie and Marik together and cries even harder*

Getting too sad, must get happy soon. Please??!!??!!?? *drops down on hands and knees and begs*

Lady Elfskye
person ShadowofLight
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow what timing! I just turned my radio on and there's that song playing!Oh I love hte song it's so sad and heartbreaking. I'm glad Mr. Cullen is back and Bakura is trying to get back on his feet. I feel terrible for Marik. But hey, so far one of the best fics I've read so far. Anxiously waiting for an update.
person Caterfree
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

I'M BACK!!!!!! I'm Back! I'm Back! I'm Back! *Throws confetti* This story has advanced quite a bit since I last reviewed...was it NovembOctoOctober? Anywise, I'm back, and unfortunatly, my reviews are going to be few and far apart. I have to read most of this story offline (Copied and pasted into MSWord) and by the time I can return, more updates are here. Gomen ne for being gone so long. The Bakaru fo a librarian blocked AFF.net from The school! *Glares at the school's general direction* Anywise, I am glad to be back! Now on to the purpose of a review....

Poor Marik. MHe misses Malik so much, but can't express it. Poor Malik. Controlled my Aku most of the time, not knowing what he doees in his body. They...they're suffering so much. *Sighs* DANGIT!! When's Aku gunna be sensed and get the shit beat outta him?! I WANNA READ AKU'WNFAWNFALL RA DANG IT!!! Well, I also wanna read Steven's downfall, but I think Aku's wil be far more wrth while to read. *Demonic grin* Anywise, I hove to go now! Please continue again soon!

Ja Ne! ^_~
person Jade
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:J&YJ: aww....poor Marik. He's been through so much.
:J: ::hugs Marik::
:YJ: Seto should come through with the money to help the guys out
:J: ::looking at Yami::what is it with you and money all the time?
:YJ:....::just smirks::
:J&YJ: welcome back Bakura!::pounce, hug::
person MarikIshtar77
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter!!!!! Everything was just so emotional! Everything from Cullen dropping by, to Bakura waking up, and Marik's pain was so real feeling. I'll give you an A+++! Im so happy Bakura's back, a day without Bakura is more like a lifetime!
person IYYashi
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Ahh!! Whaaaaaa!! ;_; So sad! Malik is going to comit suicide! NO!!
Yumi: Baby
Yuji: But It was so sad.
Yumi: Yeah. Malik deserves it for hurting Aten and Marik
Yuji: He was being controled by Aku
Yumi: This was a fine chap
Yuji: Yup can't wait for the next
Yumi: UPDATE!!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: *sobs* Poor Malik!
YD: Oh, and by the way, love....
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: *sobs* Poor Malik!
YD: Oh, and by the way, love....