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DD: *is too busy crying to say a word*
YD: I have only one thing to say..........FUCK!

I hope you can duck b-girl!! Here come the rotten tomatoes!! Cliffhangers are SOO evil!! I'm the type of person who reads the last chapter of a book first to see how it ends and you and your wife are KILLING me with these cliffhangers!!! It is bad enough to have to wait for updates as it is. I'm also impatient, can you tell? Anwayy, thanks for the compliment. I just call 'em like I see 'em. Some writers view certain topics/situations as taboo (child abuse/neglect/endangerment- multiple partner relationships) with their writing but you and your wife don't seem to be uncomfortable with writing things like that in your stories. Good job yet again with this chapter. Oh and the lover requests more lemons, he discovered the reason for the impromptu glompings while he was trying to work. Can't wait til the updates!!!!

Of course you're loved!! ^^ Oh man, after this those families are gonna have alot of counseling to go through. Oh please update I'll give you anything I have!!

Yuji: Oh god! Poor Seto!! ;_; MALIK!! ARIA!! JOEY!!!!
Yumi: *Covers ears* Fuck, Hikari shut up!
Yuji: But...But...Oh god!!
Yumi: I know It's all so sad. Aria is about to die, Malik is about to die, Joey is being controlled, Seto is heartbroken, and Aten is watching
Yuji: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
Yumi: FUCK!! HIKARI SHUT UP!!!!
Yuji: But...
Yumi: Just ask for more
Yuji: Please!! More as soon as you can!
Yumi: UPDATE!

ooohhh...sppooooky....hope Malik lives...it would be so sad if he dies....

O_______________O No! MALIK! ; . ; Well you did say you had more in store for him...and you also said you wouldn't kill him off so I'll b ok...I think..^_^ Good chappie! It was a definate tear jerker! ^_^ We won't kill you....if we did, there wouldn't b no story....This is probably the best fanfic I've read! ^_^ It's great. So manny cliffies, tearjerkers, lots of suspense. * sips Tim Horton's coffee..* mmm..coffee....^_^ Well keep up the good work. Soon they will catch Aku...soon....

Kill you?! If we killed you then this story would never be complete!! Ooh cliff hangers are the worse! Besides, you're way to loved to die so easily ^^ More soon now please!!

aww thats so sweet..by the way this is bakachibi_voidfox, i just loged into my account. hey why dont you pop by and read my storys? i hope there 1/10 as good as yours....or at least 1/100...feh...any case i hope Malik is some where safe...or mayallialling ghost busters to take care of aku...

Yuji: *Gasp* You're evil!! ;_; Is Malik dead? AGAIN!!!
Yumi: Wow. That's harsh on Joey's part.
Yuji: Is that all you can say!! Why are you so calm!! They're going to go after Aria!!
Yumi: *Shrugs* Ahh, I'm sure Aria will be ok. She's a tough cookie
Yuji: You're so mean!
Yumi: Aww come on! Lets just see what's going to happen with Joey and Seto before you call me mean!
Yuji: Fine. Please continue soon bakurasgirl
Yumi: UPDATE!!

I did it!! I finally finished all your stuff!! (At the recommendation of DDYD-'If you want a Bakure/Ryou lemon read bakurasgirl's stuff.) I must say I cried (literally), I laughed so hard I fell in the floor, I had to stop and glomp the lover a time or two ( he didn't know why but he wasn't complaining), and I wanted to pelt you with rotten vegetables a few times!! (Some of those things just shouldn't be done to sweet delicious Ryou!) ANyway, I would really like to see Hayden and Aten warm up to their fathers again. Will that happen? Things are so messed up for these poor characters they must live in the antidepressant bottle.
Keep it up!! You are doing such a good job with twists and turns and having the completely unforseen pop up.