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OMG i can seriously picture everyone trying very ahrd not to laugh outright at Marik. Reminds me of that episode of Fresh Prince now that I think about it. Only he doesn't have a stuffed parrot on his shoulder. And Tristen gettign aroused by caffee? *shrugs* To each their own. Oh but what I loved hte most was when Aria said they had to rescue Umi from the salad oh kawaii!! Now Aku's gonna overtake mokuba?? Now that was unexpected!! Man I like the little guy... Can't wait for the update.

Well that sure left me with a warm fuzzy feeling! I like Joey sober much better-)

aww...kawaii...cuddly moment! squee!..oh and poor aten *sniffle*

Well, see I was talkin 'bout ALL the chapters you wrote. The suicide chappie is like, fifth on my list. Lost BIG points for it being Malik. The second is from Baby of Mine(?), when Aria killed Malik. That's where my hatred blossemed for her. : )

I think to much

Poor Seto, Joey, Hayden and Mokie!!! Things have to get better soon for them!!

Poor Aten!! Man, this guy better not start any problems now that he knows who Aten's "uncle" is!! Man!!

Nice forshadowing scene indeed. I bet! Why do I have a feeling the worst hasn't happened yet????


Lady Elfskye

I like Clayton, he's a very sweet guy and certainly knows what he's doing. I hope Aten gets better. And the moment of Joey and Seto jsut holding each other was so sweet. I hate bullies, but then again who doesn't? I have a gift for Aten *a silver dream catcher charm* Just wear it at night or hang it over your head and he won't have any bad dreams. Enjoy sweetie ^^

YJ: I was right, it got worse
J: Yami hush!...::small sigh::that was an intense chapter to be sure,
especially with joey and seto, hayden must have been scared out of his mind!
YJ: where'd you come up with the idea with seto and mokuba being
hurt by their step father like that? I'm not putting anything past anyone,
but that was an unexpected twist for the brothers.
J: ::small shiver, then a soft sigh, then grins and winks to aria,
handing her a few bags of M&M's:: Here ya go cutie, since Donny didn't have any
you can have some of mine ^.^

more chaps! more lemons!

Well Doneell ell Done!! I ended up on the floor ling ing yet again. Potty training....brings back memories....Walking into the bathroom and the child has assumed the 'wipe me position'. The one with the fanny in the air. Go RYou make daddy do his duty. Look out Lover you got it coming. Go Seaman Cheesy!!

Yuji: All funny and sad
Yumi: Marik's new last name is Weanie! *Lol*
Yuji: Joey is so drunk!!!
Yumi: I didn't know he had it in 'im. Or even the balls to threaten Seto Kaiba.
Yuji: I hope everything turns out ok
Yumi: UPDATE!!

WOW! I'm just........uh..(can't finish sentence-still wiping drool off my keyboard,lol) That was SO good! I think when I win the lottery I'm gonna buy the rights to Yu-Gi-Oh and have you be my head writer. (I know, I'm wishful thinking again,LOL) Anyways, that was like THE HOTTEST thing I've read in ages! Way awesome Ryou x Bakura, I loved it!!!!!!! Looks like Wheeler needs a kick in the ass though! (I'm sure Seto will take care of it though *grin*)