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Aten handled Santa better than my kids. They screamed. Oh nad don't forget the carrot for rudolph along with the cookies for Santa.

HELL-O!! WTF was that??!!?? Oy, Aten is very lucky that Marik knows about Aku, or I have a feeling that the boy would be in even more trouble than what he is. And lucky that Bakura left!!!! Very scary what Marik seen!! Hmm, why do I suspect "the One" is Robbie???? It makes sense. But yet makes almost too much sense. As for Holiday presents, for Aria, a certificate for a lifetime supply of M & M's!!!! LOLOLOL!! Seriously!! A bunch of dress up clothing, like princess stuff, Egyptian clothing, etc. Some Egyptian clothing for Aten too!! I'm sure Isis (Ishizu) could get that for them. For , hm, hmmm, a giant stuffed Monkey. Or maybe a complete Artist set, the ink, paints, desk, etc, from Unkie Puppy!!!


Lady Elfskye

hey liked your story . I haaave a questioon though? your not going to let yami hurt Bakura agian .

Okay...Presents....hmmm. I have an idea! Since Aria loves dolls and I am kinda obsessing over one of my childhood favourite shows, I wanna give her a Rainbow Brite Doll. Bakura would probably hate seeing it. For Aten...I'll give him...umm...how about...a plushie of the god Anubis. Sorry, kinda had no ideas for thatt kit kinda like a puppy version of the Jackal God...hehe...anyway, those are my gifts to them!

yay lemon!!!...loved this although I'm curious if Hayden is the one to see Aten's death. Is Marik going to go back soon?

ooooo! can't wait till the next chappy! squee! it feels like so long....oh yeah... *pulls out a present* its a giant teddy bear for aten (and i mean like person sized big), and for aria *pulls out another present* a dagger straight from egypt... *hands you another present* give this to ryou, its a photo album, *takes out oast ast present* some toys for bakura...hehehehe

Holy cow!! How dare Aku corrupt such a sweet and innocent little boy!! Oh wait, it's his job *sighs wearily* Man oh man, things are so not getting better. And Anzu is coming back? Aye ve. Well, what better way to burn off their frustration then by taking it out on her? I mean she keeps saying 'Pain is like friendship!' Great now I'm gonna have nightmares. I was wondering, are Helpless Child, Unfaithful Guardian, and that other card to represent Aria real are did you make them up? Okay I better stop writing. Anxiously awaiting the next update.

Great chapter! Boy, I'm glad I'm not in Aten's mind! I'm glad I'm not Marik either-I get the feeling Bakura's gonna make him finish his shift walking funny. O.O

OOOH, that's right, PRESENTS! *runs off shopping*.......(tic toc, tic toc).........okay, back. Here's a nwingwingset for Aria and Aten! Enjoy kids! *slips Ryou a tin of cookies and candy canes* Don't let Aria see these!!

Gifts oh how could I forget!! I know I already said Dream Catchers for the two of them. You can hang them over your bed at night and it should keep bad dreams out and let only good dreams in. It's helped me out many nights even to this day. Also, for Aria, a bag of red and green holiday m&m's; for Aten, a water color painting set. I would give him oil paints but water colors are safer for his young heart. Hee try not to kill the 'elf' when you meet her.

Hey! I have just read up on all the chapters I have missed ^-^ I'm glad that Aku is out of Malik now...T_T But poor Aten! Damn, this fic is so addicting! The only YGO fics I really read any more are yours, and Hato Chiisai's.

Now, as for gifts for the chibis ^-^ Gemini elves! My fave card, and I have two plushies of them *gives them the plushies* One boy for Aten, and the girl for Aria. ^-^