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for Hostile Takeover

by Aten

person bakachibi_viodfox
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Squee!..now thats...an xmas present...hehehehe ^^
person Terra
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Santa can put a naked Bakura in a stocking? If so I know what I want for Christmas. It's never too early to start asking. LOL
person Camille
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did anyone hear of privacy for crying out loud? That was hilarious! :)
person ShadowofLight
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ROFL Miranda is great!! Poor Seto, I can't blaim fim for getting sick. Not after that disaster with Anzu *makes face* And it does seem Marik has met his match in sharp wit too. I'm really glad Miranda and Robbie made it, hee group picture!! Okay sorry about that; love this chapter and look! No bad guys! ... But for how long? *inserts creepy m* ok* okay I need caffiene. Double lemonin next chapter, double yay!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wipes drool off of screen* Yummy!!!!!! Heh, humor and a lemol inl in one!!! Cute chappie! I really like Miranda!! She is sooo cool!!!

Wow, two lemons in one?? Coolies!!!

Hmm...I wonder what was up with Yami and Yugi while everyone else was having fun.

You know, I think you are going to drive me crazy with this story!!!!
LOLOL

Lady Elfskye
person Jade
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YJ: yeup...thought so...he's as power hungry as all the others
J: Yami!...ah well, it is an interesting perspective, not all things
are as they appear, history IS written by the victors... and there
usually is another side to a story, which I am Loving! heh, great ficcy ^.^
YJ: got that right, and the Lemons...yummy...it alright if I borrow Bakura for a while?
J: YAMI!!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I was right about something for a change!!!! Cool!!!

So, I hope Seto lets Miranda and Robbie come over for the holidays!!! So sad to know that she lost a little one!! And that was just too sad with Santa and the heart. And soo sweet at the same time!! And "GO ARIA!!!!!" Tear that lunatic up!!! LOLOLOL!!! Bloodlust indeed!!

And Yami must be stopped. Period! He's not a nice person!! Are you sure you haven't had him "infected" by Aku??????

Lady Elfskye
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh! xmas! kwl holiday! i got a present for aku.. its a kick in the ass...hmf...
person MarikIshtar77
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY BLOODLUST! Bloodlust is like FRIENDSHIP! -Oh gods, was that me? *grin*

Great chapter! I think that damned elf bitch Anzu needs a candy cane shoved up her ass. *laughs evilly*

Yay candy cane up Anzu's ass!
person ShadowofLight
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First, the holiday shopping was so funny!! Althought, I feel major sympathy for that scorpion. But I bet he looks cute with tiny antlers on his head. The kids too too adorable for words, especially Aten and Robbie. Oh you jsut want to hug them until your arms break! However, that sudden appearence of jessica's sister (who knew the whore had a sister?) made me cringe as well. Poor Ryou. Miranda is too cool I really like her ^^ I can only imagine if Tristen overheard what she said *giggles* No wonder those her and Ryou seem to get along so well. And on a final note, please oh please let the kids beat that @#$%&* Yami!! If he does hurt Aten... well let's jsut say he's gonna have several EXTREMELY pissed relatives on his tail. Yugi should have left him trapped in the puzzle longer ot melt that damn thing down. Sweet story.