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OMG that was so good! I loved it! i haven't read that many lemons but i really love this one! yugi and yami make the best couple! this was very well written! great job!
^_^
byee

Kai-chan... *hugs her yami and offers a kawaii smile*

YAMI KAI: *stares wide eyed at his hikari* No way Aibou! You are _NOT_ having chocolate covered popcorn!!!

*pouts* Onegai... *puppy eyes*

YAMI KAI: *looks away before the puppy eyes can get him* No way in hell hikari dearest! I am _NOT_ going to have a hyper fox girl running around all over the place! You get so bad that even _I_ can't keep up with you!!! ~_~

Okay... *lets go of Yami Kai and goes to her other yami*

YAMI MIRA: No. I agree with Kai on this one Mira-chan...

*pouts, sniffles ands gos go of her female yami(hai, I do have to yami's... and they don't get along to well...)* -_- *sits down on a chair and ignors both her yami's* Awesome ficcie!!! *turns and walks out of the room*

YAMI MIRA AND YAMI KAI: *hear the door lock click and look at each other* Kuso... *both race to the door and try to get it open* OO

*snickers as she walks down the hall and into the kitchan* Chocolate covered popcorn, here I come... ^_____^

Yaaaaaay! hehe! Go Yugi! I knew there was a lil' tiger in there somewhere! ^_~ Even if it does take sugar to bring him out! LOL! Nice fic!

...wow...hmm, that wuz...interesting. seriously, i luv ur fic TONZ! yami and yugi make such a cute couple ^_^

I love Yugi and Yami fics!!!! AHAHAHA, and I love when Yugi's in control... I knew that little clown wasn't so innocent! HA!
Good job!

you should add more to this story it is very interesting

hey! I reviewed your story on fanfiction and i really like your writing....lemon, me love them...choclate popcorn is so good....i tried it but chocolate is good on everything...lolx...i think it is so cute...ja ne...write more

I don't know about your whole 'Yami' and 'Hikari' business, but, in any case, I find the dialogue humorous. I have to say that I like Yami more so that Hikari. Purely because she reminds me more or less of myself. In any case...

Good story. I was VERY appreciative of the whole melted chocolate bit. Very nice. Very nice indeed *shakes head vigorously* ^_^. That has to be one of my all time favorite snaks. And with the Yami and Yugi situation you just presented me I'm sure I'll love it even more now! Let's see...that's jell-O, pixie stix, pudding and now popcorn/melted chocolate. <--List of things I now can't eat without thinking about YGO YAOI. Not that I mind, hehe, not in the least. I'm just waiting to read someone who was creative enough to use honey. My, that would be a sweet treat! ^_^; bad joke, I know. But who cares! It's happy yaoi time! *ahem* Good story. I'm sorry aboutt eh whole FF.N kicking you off. there are SO many good stories that have been kicked off since the banning. And so many authors are refusing to post them again for fear of another restriction. *sigh* I'm missing out on some reportedly good stuff. Oh woe is me.

Hey, I'm curious. Are you apart of the Yahoo group known as: yugiohyaoigwdbz? If you are than that would explain much. But if you aren't I extremsuggsuggest you join. We have so much fun in our little group! Not to mention some georgeous pics, links, fics, and just the general insanity of the bunch. If you haven't I'm gonna ask that you join. An authoress of such dillusions and talent should be apart of us!

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/yugiohyaoigwdbz/

Sure, we also discuss a bunch of other animes and yaoi from them, but it's all good!

But, yeah, great story. I love Yami's lemons and definately think you should write more. I'm going off to read your "beachin' vacation', or something to that affect. Here's hoping I am as equally satisfied with that as I have been with Shadow and Chocolate. ^_^

Rez