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by Ykarzel

person DarkQueen
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that was Awsome and you're right Sequel Sequel Sequel I think I've made my request pretty Ovious I LOVE you writing It's AWSOME although Ice was my FAV. But ~anyways~ AWSOME job as always Keep it up You kNOW YOUR'RE GOOD ^_^ I gotta Go LATER...

P.S
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person Animom
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*reaches for defibrillator* Oh. My. Lord. and. Lady.

What a pleasure to read, in so many ways. For starters, hotness with seme!Jouno (hooray). Then, marvelously, no mind games or SM trips (yet no oochy-coochy WAFF either) ... always a joy. Finally, the general quality of writing, especially our ability to create a scene and character with minimal verbiage.

Brava!
person some chick
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehehe... jou on top. that's one not many have explored. it's very good. i'm gald you're making more of it. *whines* you should make more of routine, but nooooooo. oh course i do see the genius of leaving it by itself. keep it up. the genius i mean not the routine. routines do get boring after awhile.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: OH HOLY HELL! THAT WAS SOOOOOOO HOT!!!
DD: I love the way Dnd Jnd Jou teased the heut out of my boy too.
YD: And why don't you guys write more? You're style is excellent.
DD: I'm gonna go grab the wife and make her read this!!
YD: Good job, ladies...kudos.
DD: *HUGS*
person Funkegirl
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sequel? Yes. More. Please do write more. The whole idea of Joey being raised in a whore house is rather interesting. I like the idea. Is good. *mous quietly at the no sequel to routine* Oh well. That one was good too.
person Yamijou
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOOO SEMEJOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love jou as seme...or uke.justjust withkaiba in general...I love the whole whorehouse thing it really does kind of work with jous home situation..lol I really hope ou do end up writing a sequel eventually...mabe the others finding out or something? or honda thinking jous whoreing out to kaiba for money..lolI dunno...Cant wait till next chappie in this..but Im also waiting for school week and our other fics so Ill last!
person L:P
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Kay as always, absoluty fantactic. Its still a lil weird for me to think that my best friend is writing this but hey your good at it so why not? I told you I'd reveiw so here you go!!
~LK
person leaf zelindor
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your right about it screaming sequal...but if you leave it like that it's yoru choice, i would love to see more though. it's a really good fic ^_^ !Leaf~
person Jenniyah
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, nice, I love your fanfics. Hope you continue this one....
EH? no more Routine? aw, that one was sooooooooooo good. All your stories could be multi-part stories....
Your livejournal is nice too. Nice pic in the background...hehe. Where's that from? doujin right?
Hope you write more soon. Love your stuff!!
person Becky
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story! Please write more... ::Gives puppydog eyes:: Pretty please.

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