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for Succumb

by Ykarzel

person Anonymous
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would love for you to continue with this story, but I think if I had to choose, I would like for you to finish School Week first.(I think you should add more Otagi and Honda stuff, but that's just me)

Oh, and by the way, your one of my favorite authors, though some of your pairings aren't my favorite.(but none the less a great read)
person T-Boz
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was incredible. I'm glad to see another take on Jounouchi-san, and your take was completely original and entertaining. This is a truly wonderful story, and I cannot stress this enough, so incredibly original. And, it's also damn hot. Virgin!Seto and Dom!Jou...giggle. Keep writing.

T-Boz

P.S. SEQUEL!
person Renee the Rabid Squirrel
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WoOT! Greatness here once again, you certainly know how to throw in your smut. XD I loved it, I loved it, I loved it. On to read the update!
person YumeNoDchan
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so kewl and so kyute ^_^ I love them together. It's nice to see Seto as the uke for one *giggle* Great job on this fic!! I Love It! (and about sequals and stuff, I know how u feel. TRUST ME. I have yet 2 write mine ^_^")
person Chaos
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hikari Chaos:Great fic!! I loved it, you HAVE to make a sequal!!! *puppy eyes*Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeee!!!!!!!!!
Yami Chaos:Hikari, SHUT UP!!*glares*I don't normally do this but..... Will you please make a sequal to Succumb?
Hikari Chaos:*gasps*Be still my beating heart, my yami actually said please!!!!! Not even I can get her to say that!!??
Yami Chaos:*grumbles*So I said please, what of it?
Hikari Chaos:Nothing.*hugs yami*Anywayz, would you try and grant crazed fan's wish and make a sequal? My yami and I would appreciate it! Ta ta for now!!^-^
person Teizoku
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. All I can say is wow. Okay, I can say more. I must applaud you, finally, putting an end to all those drunk beating dads. You made Jou's dad cool for one. o_o; *shrugs* I like pimps. Anywho, on to the story, it is an innovative Jou/Seto. Man, I don't even like Jou/Seto's or non-characters mixed in my tea of fics but oh how a wonderfully written story can change your mind. ^_^ , and if you DON'T write a sequel to this I will HURT you. OkayEASEEASE write more. I'm *begging* you. *grabs shirt, tear* o.o *hugs* Toodles!

Remember: Ai to Heiwa!

-Teizoku-chan
person CarrytheSheepdog
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Moshi moshi! This was realy good and I was waiting for it for some time. Thanks for geting it out and I'm already awaiting the next chapter!! ^^

Keep it up and beleve in yourself, 'cuse me and Li do!

Love, peace and YAOI!
CarrytheSheepdog
person Bakuraluva
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! So I'm glad I read the full thing here! Very nice work! ^_^
person BallroomBlitz
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hat was once again everything that was awsome. YaY!! and yes it screams More!!!
person Cat in the web
schedule November 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it!!! In the beginning it was sweet, and in the end it was hot!!! Gongratulations to the writer!

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