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person Jessica
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is such a good story! Please update it with another chapter??!!!?? Poor Yuugi that cookie was so thoughtful - I wish a guy would do that for me - and that slut threw it on the ground!

::I'm listening to Linkin Park ^_^ great music but it's making me depressed lol ::

Yea, and Yami should know better than hang with that bitch! ::lightbulb:: Oh! Are you going to make themk upk up on the ski trip?

That first chapter with Yuugi's POV is so sad!

Great story

Continue soon!

~ Jessica ~
person Yaky
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWW that was SO CUTE!!!! The only problem was that BITCH Anzu she's the one in the way *smirks* (Let's kill the BITCH whose with me) ~Anyways~ AWSOME job Keep it up and be a doll and Update SOON K, LATER...
person DarkQueen
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWW my Yami blushing that was a kodak momment right there were's a Fucking camarea when you needone *looks 'round* Shit can't find one! Just gotta tell you it was so CUTE let's get rid of Anzu she's ruinig the picture....and you got Ryou&Baku-chan too hope Malik&Marik are together and let's not forget the Puppy&Master they're Just as CUTE so yeah!!! But anywayz great chapter Keep up the GREAT work hun and be the AWSOME writer you are and UPDATE SOON..
LATER....
person Chibi-Inu
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^__^ This story is so cute and a good plot! Continue soon! ^^

>_____< DAMN THAT BITCH!!!!!! *referring to Anzu* SHE MUST DIE!!! GRAB YOUR PITCHFORKS AND KNIVES!!!!
person Shingami
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Shadow, I really liked this story. (Of course, I'm the obessessed Y/Y shonen-ai fangirl who hunts out stories like these) I love the fluffiness and how the pain of Yugi's loneliness is believable- something I can rarely feel from fanfics. Maybe you just wrote it in a way that reminded me of myself. I don't like Anzu, but I think too many fanfics pose her as 'the enemy', which I can certainly understand. It just seems a tad too overdone.

Overall, this was a good fanfic which I enjoyed reading, and I hope you update soon!
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...too cute! Yami blushed? *grins* Adorable ^_^ Great fic! Update soon okies?
~YamiRynEnjeru
person Araki
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please

Yami: go back to eating your lunch.
Araki: Hamburgers...yuk,,UPDATE SOON
person Araki
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please

Yami: go back to eating your lunch.
Araki: Hamburgers...yuk,,UPDATE SOON
person silent angel
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so cute! i cant wait for the next chapter!
person TamasineRyu
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellenge story, though I can't wait til I can read more. YOu leave off at the worst moments (meaning cliff hangers, I hate you lol j/k ^_^) making me wait til the next chapter. WRITE FASTER! lol j/k. ^_^ Excellent story again lol. 9.4/10 great job.-

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