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for Lost in a Unknown World

by superjmm

person Tasha
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yaah that was brilliant. All angsty and funny and lovely interactions. Marik and Bakura's interaction, Yami and Yugi's (liked it when he walked away from them after getting back and incited Marik's rage). Loads of amusing bits, Joey's comment to Seto was priceless and Yugi's PMS was played brilliantly so. I'm not all that keen on on men turning into actual females but in this one it was necessary and acceptably likeable. Kico was very good as was D's scenes.
But best bit: Was Bakura & Marik when Yugi went into labour - hee thats just so funny *uncontrollable laughter*
I was hoping you would do the birth scene and that we'd get the PMS & bone-crush ^_^
I guess Marik found out just how strong Yugi can be and Bakura's...well in a way he's doing some violating of his own ne? (closest to a Kura/Yugi in this one) But AH MAN I cracked myself up!
Favourite!
person redrsgdsfg
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its me again!!! NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINISHHHH ITTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Me again!! :P
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fdsgdgdfgds OH MY RA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HEHEHEHEHEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
person Kirikouchan
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeel
Me cant wait for the next story ><

*still isn't over her shock about the final manga volume of Yugioh*
Me do hope they make like a sequel or something X.x

*cough* ahem ^^;;;
BTW Me have question.
Are you ever going to continue
'Millum Gum Guardian' ?

Me thinks it's a great story as well, but you haven't updated that one for a long time ^^;;;;

Me don't wanna bother you or anything so me just gonna say keep up the great writing,

greetz K-chan. ^_^
person soultaker
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Hurry up and write the sequel!(:
person Mizu
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! Why'd you leave it there!? You betcontcontinue!!!! I swear! You better post soon!!!!
person Moztartz_Ballad
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
man I was wondering what happen with this fic. O.O I was really begining to enjoy it. Nice cliffhanger.
I wanna see if the evil guy takes Yugi back with him. Please continue soon! Update soon!!!

Moztartz_Ballad
person Nasyki
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! That was fun!!!! I can't wait till the little 1s come!!!! And I jknewknew there'd be 2!!!! Ha ha! hum...so u don't Know what ta name em, ne? Hum....hows about 4 the girl; Umi, Kotori, Sekhmet, NephthMaatMaat, Hathor, and Shu, Bastet, and 4 the boy; Kamui, Eri, Yuki, Anibus(he he...I like that one Y-Y*nod nod* it is a good one, that it is) Kenshin, Horus, Amun, Geb, Aten, Sekhmen, Amon-Ra, or Osiris....Te he he....I know alot bout egypt....I got most those god/goddesses of the top Of My HEAD!!!!! P-P ^-^ +_+ <^>
person SoulDreamer
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: GIRL?! weeeeeeee!! i need to get pink stuff for the baby shower!!mi: mi: you kno it's not real.....rite?
Me: SHUT UP!!! ^^ i can't wait!! continue soon!!

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