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January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Xpyne: This is great--there aren't enough Y/Y/S out there.
Solitaire: Heh, everyone knows a threesome is best. ^_~
Xpyne: Oh yeah! Y/Y/S anJ/B J/B forever! Poor Kaiba, that terrible undignified costume...
Solitaire: ::winces::
Xpyne: Next year he can dress up as a kitten on a leash, that Yami's holding of course. Two leashes! `Cause Yugi's on the other one... Who needs to wait til Halloween? Time to put neko Kaiba and Yugi on Yami's leashes now!
Solitaire: ::smirks:: I'd like to see that.
Xpyne: Great job, keep writing. ^__^
Solitaire: Heh, everyone knows a threesome is best. ^_~
Xpyne: Oh yeah! Y/Y/S anJ/B J/B forever! Poor Kaiba, that terrible undignified costume...
Solitaire: ::winces::
Xpyne: Next year he can dress up as a kitten on a leash, that Yami's holding of course. Two leashes! `Cause Yugi's on the other one... Who needs to wait til Halloween? Time to put neko Kaiba and Yugi on Yami's leashes now!
Solitaire: ::smirks:: I'd like to see that.
Xpyne: Great job, keep writing. ^__^
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* Go Yami and Yugi! Hehe, I can just picture a disgruntled Kaiba in a Blue Eyes costume . . . so utterly perfect for Mr. 'I have a broomstick stuck in odd places'.
Way to go!
As for the story . . . gee, if you couldn't tell, I love it. Great job : )
Way to go!
As for the story . . . gee, if you couldn't tell, I love it. Great job : )
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SOOOOOO HOT! and cute too! can you imagine a disgruntled Seto in a BEWD costume? KAWAII!
please continue your works!
AL
please continue your works!
AL
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good, good.
Too bad this is a one shot fic.
I think it has potential to be a complete
story.
Again, well done.
--Mariah
Too bad this is a one shot fic.
I think it has potential to be a complete
story.
Again, well done.
--Mariah
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
YD: Oh, holy hell! That was SO hot!
DD: *snicker* and I can just see Seto in that costume!
Seto: *grumbles* Not funny.
DD: Great story chicky!
YD: Oh, holy hell! That was SO hot!
DD: *snicker* and I can just see Seto in that costume!
Seto: *grumbles* Not funny.
DD: Great story chicky!
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November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow......that was so hot.
I've been reading yaoi for a while, and one thing always surprises me.
How can people who don't have penises know so well how to pleasure those who do? Even if it is only words, I'm still turned on XD
As far as plot goes, I liked the way that it was humorous, and although you rushed the lemon part, I have no objections due to the well written nature of it.
I can only hope you write more fics XD
I've been reading yaoi for a while, and one thing always surprises me.
How can people who don't have penises know so well how to pleasure those who do? Even if it is only words, I'm still turned on XD
As far as plot goes, I liked the way that it was humorous, and although you rushed the lemon part, I have no objections due to the well written nature of it.
I can only hope you write more fics XD