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for Shind Oni Kokoro

by YamiRynEnjeru

person PrincessLemon
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
1st off. Over 850 *applauds* very well done for only 3 chpts, that just goes to show how great of a story this is

Woah, that was...different. That poor boy, having his wyngs ripped off like that *tsk tsk tsk tsk tsk* That was very intrigueing though and I can't wait to see to what happens next.

BTW

Thanks for the mention, I feel soi honored *places both hands on face and blushes daintily*
person Elys
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so please don't take so long this time!(Yami needs to die or something.)
person AngelStarFire
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bwahaha... 'Kura and Ryou look so good together... *starts drooling at the mental images provided* Eh... The only thing is... When are you going to update?! I love this story a lot (and the long chapters don't bother me... *grins*), and can't wait for the next chapter... or the lemony smut that's hopefully coming with it... oops...pun. ^^;;; But, anyway... I love this, and not only is it an excellent story, but your grammar/spelling is impeccable... ^o^
person Bakuraluva
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cool! Though Ryou seems to be almost mind-numbingly innocent at some points. I love it when Yami is the evil one! (well, relatively most evil, in this case. ) Please update! ^__^
person AJAngelique
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my freakin goddess! I LOVE IT! I WANT MORE DAMN IT!
person PrincessLemon
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Hell...SWEET! I can't wait to see what happens next! That is so cool how those guys can go out during the day and all. Can't w8 2c what Marik's story is. WRITE MORE!
person c0nfus3d
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting, though i wonder who ryou is gonna pick. I HOPE NOT YAMI!!!....wow, i never thought i'd ever utter those words.....anywho, this is hard, i equally like marik and bakura and i don't know who he should go with........can't wait till you break the tie. wha what did bakura and yami do this time? ........again i never thought i'd be acussing yami too. this is twisted, but i like it. poor ryou, always rejected.....ah well, he's got bakura, marik, and yami now. what i wouldn't give to be in his pants right now..... tha that sounded to literall, damn i didn;'t mean it that way......god i should lay of the dr. pepper. oh and i love that whole ryou's birthday is on halloween that was hilarious so are other things in this fic i don't have time to quote but update soon....please?
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! I can't wait till the next chapter!!
person Shiny Possessed Kitsune Girl
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
n.n Great stuff... Teehee every one lusts after Ryou but of course they do... i mean it's RYOU who couldn't like him...

Anywho update soon PLEASE

Love Ya Muches

~SPKG~
person sharem
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is getting REALLY good...*drools at Marik and Bakura* And always happy to help whenever needed...^_^