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for Trick or Treat

by TuscanyMariah

schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... this story isn't as bad as I thought it was when I wrote it....
person darhpharaoh04
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This gre great story!!!!!! you have to write more and give us an ending. Are you planning to kill Yami? 'cause if you are, think again, there will be a lot of people heartbreaked if you offer him as sacrifice. There must be another way to destrroy the well of souls. Keep writing and let us know the end of this prophecy. Yami rules!!!!
person alostblackcat
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i want my blood sucked by a hot bishie!!!!!!!!!!!!
person alostblackcat
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i want my blood sucked by a hot bishie!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mmm.....
I thought YamiRynEnjeru's story was much better
than mine. But *shrugs* lets just say they're both good.
Joey is.... not really in it much. he doesn't fit into the
storyline.
But..... yeah. I'm still thinking of a way he could fit in.
*hint hint*
*thinks*
Yeah, thats it.
Thank for the reviews guys.

-- Mariah
person YamiRynEnjeru
schedule November 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Yum!! ^_^ Pt. less lemons are alright by my book, luv the story (especially since it has a plot, unlike mine -_-;;) Keep up the great work!!
~Yami Ryn Enjeru
person alostblackcat
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
whoa this fic is so so so cool but creepy too

no offense to YamiRynEnjeru but i think your story is better

i love the whole idea of vampires...i have an obsesson with blood and i just went out as a vampire tonight

where is jou in this fic.. is he with seto?

please write more soon this is a really great fic
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG I want more keep up the great work hun. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person princessofligddarddarkness
schedule October 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG I want more keep up the great work hun. I 't w't wait to read the next chapter.