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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an amazing story please please update soon!!!
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, nice fic. I like the plot so please post the next chapter already. i'm not demanding its just that i really like the story so please update it soon. pretty please!
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Carmen5: 0o0o0o0o this ish co0l...please update again ^__^
Nemrac: 0.o wow... ok update again seeya
Nemrac: 0.o wow... ok update again seeya
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
onegia! Put up the next chapters!lovelove this fic and even though I'd read it 50 or so times on fanfiction.net (growls angrily at the removal of all her favourite fics) I want to read the rest again!!! It's such a wonderful fic!!!!!!1
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December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! It was so cute! Please continue on witapteapter 5!Poor Ryou!
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December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've already read this on ff.net (I'm Sakura-chan!), but I'm so glad it's still up somewhere. I really love it, and I just had this great urge to read it over again. Mmmm.... Oh, just saying so maybe you can correct it, there's some dialogue missin thi this chapter where the Duel Monsters speak to each other and where Yami and Bakura speak in Egyptian after Bakura's shot. God, get the rest up soon, I'm dying to finish rereading.
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November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really great, I read it a while back on ff.net and am just now re-reading it. The main fault is in this chapter - Bakura chages sides too fast, it's jarring to read and not very believable. If you ever get around to rewriting this story, show a lot more of the conversation between Yami and Bakuka before he breaks down crying. For now - just get the rest of the story up PLEASE. I wanna read it.
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November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhh!!!! is this finsihed up in the next one?! damn cliffies! it was a shame that your first fic had to be tatekn down but now i must go on about your cleverness going on in this fic! like how finally everyone started to be a smart ass to each other lol. and then how ryou got to conquer his fearswas was so great! but damn it le them get there in time! Let Ryous dad be excepting they need a lil break now! it was so good where is it? *whines* wahhhh yay!!!!
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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good fic, it's so sad! Please update soon, I'm hooked!
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October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMR!! OMG! OM WHOEVER!!!! WHAT A PLACE TO HAVE A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! THIS FIC ROCKS AND I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I love fics where Bakura realises his love for Ryou... hehe.. BUT POOR RYOU... awwwww MAN! please update soooon I must know what happens neeext!! o.. I said that already...
Yamikaito: my hikari is spazzing out, O.o; she wants to find out what happens to Ryou and she hopes that dr gets whats comin to him... and she also wants to see what happens when Ryous dad finds out about Ryou and Bakura...lol...
Yamikaito: my hikari is spazzing out, O.o; she wants to find out what happens to Ryou and she hopes that dr gets whats comin to him... and she also wants to see what happens when Ryous dad finds out about Ryou and Bakura...lol...