rate_review Reviews

THis was kinda okay...I just like the canon origin of Yami no Bakura better, since it fits into the storyline and everything, and you could get some really good characterization with forgiveness between them out of it...but this was okay.

I've really been enjoying this, and I loved the new chapter. I do hope that Bakura not wanting Tea around wasn't a sign of Tea-bashing, just him not liking her personally. Bashing is such a turn off in deliciously evil fanfic like this. I'm looking forward to the rest of it and I hope to see it soon.

Great chapter!!!..^_^..full of lots of citrus goodness! Can't wait for the next update!

Wow, great story, and I really can't wait for Yami/Yugi/Ryou/Bakura, thats a group I haven't seen yet. I'm glad to see Bakura and Yami getting along, it's also something I've never really seen, and you put them on easy (for them) terms quite well, not some rushed, let's be friends in the second chapter or something. Good job creating a really hateable character with Ryou rapist (whose name I can't remember) too. Having duel monsters constantly around was a nice touch, and the fact that they're so clueless about modern technology is funny. Please, oh please update this soon!

Oh, this one too. I love this fic, and i know you have written more of it. If its somewhere else, could you direct me to it?
Many thank you's

Now, normally, I hate this site. Too much hentai. But I got on to read your story, which only goes to show that I'd do to read your stories. Do you know what my mother would do to me if she found out I was on this site?!?!?!?!?!? Well, anyway, loved the story, update soon, PLEASE drop me an e-mail (for the fiftieth time) and put in even mfluffluff! SOME people may say there is too much fluff...*glares pointedly at Jen* but I say there's never too much fluff! So add some more! Onegai? Let's see...what else can I say that I've already said a billion times? Oh, yeah, did I mention that you're the greatest authoress in the world and you should make a career out of writing? Hai? I did? Okay. Well, I said it again. *repeats sentence a million times over and then runs out of breath* Well, you get the idea, anyway. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! Or I will be sad. Heck, I already am sad, because I MISS FOREVER AUTUMN AND TRAPPED AND THIS IS STUPID AND EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOUR STORIES...YES, EVEN THE HENTAI ONES, BECAUSE THEY PROVE THAT YOU ARE STILL WRITING, AT LEAST! I am so sad I feel like crying right now. But reading more of this story did make me quite a bit happier. Now, I think this review is quite long enough, don't you? I'll drop in another one soon, though! I know, I know, I review too much. But I am bored. Gomen. Sayonarra!

*enters*
*waves*
Hi ^^

I overslept my mathclass today *sight*
--> I didn´t hear the alarm clock!! ^.^"""""""

so i had time to finished reading!!!
*g*

GREAT, U have to go on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love Ryou, I love his Yami.... and your lemon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please, please, please.... don´t stop!!!

I must have more reasons to skip math class.

*kisses*
your Simyta

ok, it´s 3 o´clock in the morning!
I ´ve a very important math class in 4 hours...
but I can´t stop!!!

I can´t stop reading your FF! *sight*
It´s gerat, unbeliveable......... fantastic!

never ..never read such a good one....

damn it, that I must go to bed.... *grrrrr*

ok, I hope I can go through my class without thinking of this fanfic *drop*

I´ll continue as soon as possible...

I MUST KNOW HOW IT GOES ON!!!!!!!

*hugges you*
your Simyta

Don't stop writing. Please. I'm already too much enthralled in your amazing writing style. I really want to know the rest of the story. Don't leave me hanging.

When will you finish the story?!