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Hehehehe.....I just wanted to put this story on my Recommended Reading, and I ended up reading the whole damn thing again...

I really like this story. It was one of the first serious/humorous yaoi stories I read with the yami x hikari pairings. Normally I'm not a fan of mixing-and-matching partners but in hatochiisai's stories I make an exception because it's so well written. The light-hearted funny moments mixed in with the serious, heavy drama is a good balance. I can't stand stories that don't have at least a little humor in them. I hope you get Millennium Balance re-posted so plus that story about Ahmose and Mikado (they are some of the very few original characters I like). The good grammer and spelling make it really easy to read and that's always a plus. Sayonara, and keep up the good work!

Okay. Wow. That was GREAT!!! I loved the whole story (it took me an entire day to read it)! I just... I wish I could write like that. And one really random aspect of the fic that I just LOVED was throughout the story, throughout all the sex and rape (eep) scenes, you never used the word 'penis'. (Yes, I said penis. Get over it.) So that was just one thing I really liked about it. Really, the only semi-major flaw that I could find is that I don't think that Seto would really be quite so generous with.......well.......everything. But hell, who am I to talk, I haven't even tried writing a fanfic... Though I plan to soon......Eventually........Wow that got off track. ANYway, I LOVED that story and you better come out with Millenium Balance soon or I'll sic Feral Imp on ya ^_^ (Needless to say, I can't wait for the sequel.) Thank you SO much for writing this awesome story. (*cries* COME OUT WITH THE SEQUEL DAMMIT!)

Floor lamp! *snort*

I can't wait till the sequel!

YES! IT'S DONE! ^-^ I LOVE THIS SOTRY!!! I have read it at LEAST FIFTY TIMES! ^-^ I can't WAIT for the sequle!! ^-^

I loved this ficcy. You have a great style and a wonderful sense of the unexpected. I almost fell out of my chair at the floor lamp. I confess to thinking it was a ahem sex toy...me and my hentai ^o^ thoughts or a golden statue of a phallus, modelled after yami LOL. Anyway...I look forward to reading more from you.

Maggiemay

Really great and sweet ending!!..you wrapped it up nicely yet left just enough open for a sequel..great job!

Yay!! Great chapter!! Glad to hear we get to follow them through more stories too! Kura sneaking food into the hospital..XD..I've done that for people more than a few times..^_~..Can't wait for the update!!

Maybe I missed something but got the impression that no one had bothered to tell Anzu about Bakura and Ryou earlier. Since the last she would've logically known, he *was* abusing her, what's the SURPRISE that she would be worried and not want Bakura near him? Why is that reading as if they think she's wrong for not knowing something none of them TOLD her? Is she supposed to be psychic now?

I really hoped for better. I really did. Why is that friendship between the guys is all well and good, but if you have tits, you shouldn't exist on their planet?

I am so glad that you are finally updating i can't wait to see the sequal.