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you love torchering ryou don't you? well it's good none the less.

Wow! This is incredible! Please update as soon as possible! I can't wait to see what happens. Thanks for the excellent reading.

Yamisgirl13

I hate you. *glare*


Okay so i dont 'hate you' hate you..but GAH! Talk about cliff hanger! Poor Ryou.. why didnt he tell them he was him and not Bakura. I guess it wouldnt really have made a difference would it. Can they even do that? Like, can they torture him for answers when/if they know hes not actually Bakura.. i guess they still would. Its ..evil. Man, Bakura is going to kick their asses when he gets there.. that judge will be lucky if he has balls left once Bakura finds out he tortured little innocent Ryou.
Well when i say "innocent"...*chuckles*

I'll like to take this moment to say that this fic would make an awsome movie *nods* Except that fact that it would have to be rated R because of the sex and you couldnt make it because it would be copy-writing ygo and it would go for about.. hmm.. lets see.. 12hours. BUT STILL! lol. I love your characters too btw, usually i dont like peoples own characters but yours just.. fit. =D

PLEASE update ASAP!

Oh, you're so mean, leaving it off right there! I want to know what happens next, please update this soon! I'm begging you!

You just get meaner and meaner with your cliff hangers dont you. *tries not to cry* POOR LITTLE RYOU! They're torturing him arent they *sob* Its so unfair. The 'home' thing was adorable *sigh* i hope hes okay *pouters* Your so very mean y'know..

For some reason (other than my mental state) i found it increadibly amusing that when the gaurds came to collect them from the cell Yami had FOUR leading him *giggle* Please, dont ask, i cannot explain WHY that is so amusing (other than the fact that well, hes woozy from his injury.. hes a weiner guy but that would matter) im sure the gaurds would expect that because hes the captian hed be the most dangerous or some crap.. ANYWHO
*blush* i'll stop rambling now. Please update soon and save Ryou ;_;

This is definitely gettin' good! Can't wait to see what happens to our lovely three! If Ryou wants to be a believable Bakura, he definitely needs to put on a better poker face! Loved it, though! ^-^

Ryou!!!!!!!!!!! No! Don't stop there!

oh no poor Ryou. He's going to get beaten, ne? come on Bakura hurry up, your lover is in trouble and needs you. all i can say is that at least the spanish don't know that who they think is Bakura really isn't. please update soon. this is defenitly my favourite fan fic. Keep up the story writing, your talented. and i would love to more new fan fics of yours.

RD*hisses with all the rage she feels ove what is happening to Ryou then charger through the room encases Ryou and an endlessly shifting wall of scales as hard as diamond while she grabs the guards Keith Tea and the judge chains them all to the wall takes ryou to be cuddled and comforted by Yami and Marik then slams the door shut tight then changes the walls to be a cold as space and uncomfortable as sleeping on spiked and bumby rocks then for tea keith and the Judge puts a solid steel casing aroud them covered with several thousan tons of solid rock then has the magma of the earth surface and burn boil and melt them alive then she grabs some magma mixes it with water and creates barrels of acid connects them to tubes and puts one end of the tubes into the mouths of the guards and has them burned alive form the inside out then restores them all removes the casings and the barrells then takes a leaf out of the Prince of Egypt leaves the room and hears screams as swarms of locuts scarabs plagues and other foul insects fill the room fit to bursting then she removes the insects and plagues then with a snap of her finger teleports Yami Marik and Ryou away from the building then in an almighty clash of power mixxing with Slifer Ra and Obelisk the Three Legendary Dragons as well as Exodia and with a huge kamakazi like surge of power obliterates the entire building leaving nothing in its wake* huh well thats all for now boy those pigs are going to get when Bakura finds out what became of Ryou huh brave soul doing all that for those who he once hated they should be proud of him well keep up the great work and update soon hehe im so sry ryou STAY STRONG my lil white haired usagi you can do it just hold strong if Yugi can do it so can you i believe in you ryou

WHAAAAA!!!!!!! RYOU!! ;.;!! *stabs all the horrible people that are torturing him*

Bakura's going to rip them all a new one when he finds out.