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for Burning Sea

by hatochiisai

person releena
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeee ha. you go guys i can't wait for the next chapter i wanna see some love making from all the men on those ships and poor little ryou. i also can't wait to see what they do to tea an keith lol yeha
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm just glad to see you updated I've always loved this one and sorry if don't review all that often with the rest of your work I'm just not a full blown Ryou/Bakura fan thats all but I do like this one its cute,funny, kick ass and appeses bothe my goth side and my good side ^__^ so my full spirit is happy with this fic hehe huh but poor Ryou that was just beyond cruel to do that to someone *rolls her eyes* I know I'm dissing myself but seriously humanity is without a doubt the most barbaric race in the entire unirvers huh I forgot how repulsive we are back during the times of old spain and all the crap well Hatochiisai keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE
person frogger666
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man i was waiting and waiting and waiting *continues for the next hour* and waiting. I love your story it's awesome. Especially giving Ryou skills and i love the couples.
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you, you're awesome, write more and "tearing down the sky" was kickass.
person Kura's Cookie
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't always say this, but this is one of the best stories I have ever read. I'm literally in love with this story. I never took my eyes off of the screen for a second! My favorite thing is the fact that you didn't make Ryou some weak person that couldn't stand up for himself for nothing. You made him able to sword fight! Kudos in my book. *AND* you didn't Bakura some evil being that ends up raping Ryou. (I love in the story how they accepted all charges but rape! ) Please update! I'm dying to know how they're going to free Ryou, Marik and Yami! Ok. enough rambling.

P.S. Love Tearing Down the Sky. Another one of the best stories!
person jenny
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i can't wait to see what happens next
person Chitoko Kanzaki
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T_T Noooezz RYOU! *sobs something awful*
*wails* BAKU! Hurry up and save them all *breaks down again for no apparent reason*
person jenny
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i love the strory please update soon
person Christina
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooooooooo good!! Please, Please, Please finish try and finish it!! I love this story!
person darleneartist
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darlene is my name and reviewing is what I like to do.
I have been checking ever now and again and noticed no further updates and I was wondering if you are going to update soon.
I have read all of the story up to chapter 27 and I'm hungry for those other chaps you said you would have done for christmas.
Please update soon. Darlene.