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for Burning Sea

by hatochiisai

schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's okay, we love you anyway. I hope Ryou's gonna be okay. ^_^ And everyone's safe and sound now right? Right?
person azalie
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories they are so much fun to read and you write so beautifully please keep up the good work, cant wait for the next chapter.
person star101
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person LariaKaiba
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woo-Hoo! More updates makes me happy! I love this story so much, its one of the best I've read, all of your stories are great actaully. *worships the ground you walk on*
person SnowIce
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all, it's great to read another one of your fabulous chapters. I'm truly a fan of your work and admire your brain for coming up with the plot and your writing talent. I don't review that often, but I do leave one review for every story I've read, unless I absolutely don't know what to say. That usually happens when I stumble across one that has me wincing with every line I read. Bad grammar or fiction written without it having been thoroughly thought through makes my head hurt. So I'm absolutely delighted I stumbled across this one. Now, enough with the sucking up, right?

The second thing I wanted to ask you was how you came up with this idea. Did you first simply wanted to write a pirate story and started working on it and let the plot grow and thicken with every chapter you wrote? Or did you first came up with the plot and adjusted every chapter to fit it? Or a combination of both?
The reason I ask is because I'm quite curious about other authors and where they get their inspiration from and how they handle writing a story with a well thought-out plot. I've always envied authors who could capture their readers from the first paragraph they wrote and made them want to read every other paragraph that followed.

I'll stop writing now since it's time for me to go. Still, a happy 2006 to you and I'll check back regularly to see when you've updated again. In the meantime, take care!

*huggle*
SnowIce.
person Nyami Rose
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Ello. I just came here to say YOU THE BEST AUTHOR EVER!!! And also I have a suggestion. I went on your site and saw the story "mines bigger than your" In there it states that Bakura has a good hangtime and that Ryou such a screamer. Maybe you should write a fic about that, Ryou cumming for hours on end screaming as Bakura fucks the hell out of him-Um I just did sumthin' unspeakable in my panties...0.o So I guess thats just a suggestion. Though it would be so cool if you did it!
person Chitoko Kanzaki
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAA~Ys and YAYNESS!!!! Rescue!!!

*laughs* Ryou is soo still in shock.. *shakes head*
but he'll be okay once he's finished emptying his stomach
*sagenode*
-this is Kanzaki, out! ^_~!
person Sarah
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YAY! I'm so happeh!
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*faints in relief* Omfg you had me going. Poor Ryou! *cries for him* He's all.. sick n stuff now. Poor diddums *huggles*
I get the feeling this is coming to an end soon.. *sadface* I don't want it to though!! I luff it! *sniffles* Oh well..
With that said, i still can't wait for another update. Bakura has to make Ryou feel all better now.. snuggling insured. ^_^

Great writing m'dear. Desperate for more.
person Drago
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They got saved! Keep it up!
person Wicabeth
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*collapses in relief* They saved them! They saved them!!! *WIBBLES*


ee, but, poor Ryou.. Not the best way to get in the mood there, hon =P You don't go tossing your cookies on your seme.