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I LOOOVE your story! r ger genious work! Work more on MalikXMarik or BakuraXMarik!(It was so fun:"Can you two screw a little quieter")SHEER GENIOUS!!!! Pretty please??? Or at least update another chapter?!?
IM BEGGING YOU!!! Oh! And BakuraXRyou is the best couple ever! (Although,I do prefer BakuraXMalik:)
God! This story is way too good just to be left at chapter 4! MORE!!!


P.S.Yugi is waaay to comfortable around Yami waaay to early...

5 stars! 2 thumbs up! Keep up the GREAT work, and good luck with Ryou/Bakura; seems like he's (well actually both) a real spitfire, should bry iry interesting!! I really want to see how Marik/Malik works out too!!! Great job (on all your fics too) and update, update!!!

*glomps hato chiisai* You did it! Thank you for putting your fic up here! *hugs fics* I would have thanked you earlier, but my computer broke down. :( Anywho, are you gonna put Koibito Yami up on here? I miss that one. And I can't wait to see more Millenium Balance and Tearing Down the Sky. Aw, hell... I love ALL your fics. Keep up the great work, and don't let ff.net's shittyness get you down!!!

Yay! Pirates! *grins manically* Excellent story! Very out of the ordinary and well written! (^_^ I like exclamation pts) Plz do continue, it's a great fic and I just love Ryou in this story, he's so ...cute in an angry sort of way ^_^
Anywho, post as soon as you can, I can't wait to read some more!
Ryou: *sniff* I hope Bakura luvs me soon
YRE: I'm sure he will...*looks to authoress* ^_^

I don't care how short the next chapter is, POST IT! I wanna know what's gonna happen! I love pirate stories. I like how you've written this. With Yami, Marik, and Bakura in charge, all the other chracters part of their crew and Yugi, Malik, and Ryou fighting for thier lives, and doing a pretty damn ggod job. I nearly fell off my chair laughing when Ryou beat up Yami, and again when he beat him at chess. Malik was good too, taking a piece of that pirate with him. I like the line "Come any closer and I'll take a peice of you with me." or whatever it was. It's also hilarious when Bakura gets mad at Ryou and the smaller white-haired boy is constantly getting the beter of him. Ryou's promis to kill them all or be killed was really good. And when Marik let Ryou cry on his shoulder at the end of the last chapter, that was so sweet. Maybe you should give Ryou to Marik as well as Malik aeaveeave Bakura lonely at night. Hehehe!

The only thing I don't really like is that Yugi is warmiong up to them little too quickly. Malik and Ryou are still mad but Yugi seems like he's already given into them. Maybe that's what you want, but it kinda makes him out to be.. I don't know... weak, and a little cruel to forget so fast what they did to him and his friends. I hope you see what I'm talking about.

Anyway, I love it so far and seriously hope you up date soon.

Ja!

1. fencing sword - a sword used in the sport of fencing
epee - a fencing sword similar to a foil but with a heavier blade
foil - a light slender flexible sword tipped by a button
saber, sabre - a fencing sword with a v-shaped blade and a slightly curved handle
sword, steel, blade, brand - a cutting or thrusting weapon with a long blade

I love this story, here are some of the names for a fencing sword, please continue soon, and whats with the quotes and apostraphie(sp?)