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for Burning Sea

by hatochiisai

person Eres
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are the greatest! Please continue soon!

Poor Ryou, Bakura's such an ass! Hehehe! Please do the next chapter as soon as possible
I really can't wait! I love Ryou/Bakura! Malik/Marik Yugi/Yami! So please please continue!! ^_^
person Sazza
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wai! I love this so far! ^_^ The main criticism I think is the typos (We all make em, but maybe rereading it before you post might help you catch most of them?) But apart from that I really am enjoying it and want to see more! *flails* I wanna see the stories! The yaoi! @_@;;;;

*coughs* More soon yesyes?

person DarkPharaoh87
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!!! i've never seen such a great story, Way to go!!! Please, continue writing, i want to know how they became pirates and i think people would like to see some fluffy things between Y/YY specially.
person Pure Dark Angel
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You posted the story like you promised! But you STILL HAVEN'T UPDATED!!! I'm not a happy camper right about now.
person Ryou Chan
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hato my bitch! It's goodsee see you're finally writing! Now I don't have to kill myself!! *Falls out of treehouse*
person Sailor Celestriel
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE IT!!!!!!!!! i wanna know what happens!!!! please!!!!!!!!!! for me? i really wanna know!!!!!!!! i've been waiting for this to be updated for a long time now!! I'll tell you what? if you updated soon, i'll give you a cookie!! *flashes out cookie for the author to see* so update!!!!
person Rain-chan
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I never read this! It's SOOOO good! *huggles* I can't wait for the next update!
person Yaky
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, your story is very interesting first one I've seen with such an interesting plot. I can't wait for the next chapter It's been really GOOD and I am anxious to know what is going to happen next SO PLZ continue as SOON AS POSSIBLE I love how Malik and Yugi are warming up to Marik and Yami. Now Kura is as stubborned as always. To tell you the truth I would've never seen Ryou act like that but, it's understandable I like him this way and I hope things do come 'round for him and Kura not that they wouldn't! ^_^ Well gotta go HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!!!

P.S
Would you mind E-mailing me to let me know you've updated
although I'll check often THANX LATER...
person Egyptlover2119
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I just wanted you to know that I think this story is really really really cool and it would be really awesome if you could update soon! This is really interesting! Any, I , I just wanted to let you know that this is a kick-ass story! I really do pity Ryou! To watch his father get killed right in front of him! I have a question though, how old are all the characters, at least the main ones, like Yami, Bakura, Marik, Seto, Jono, Mai, Ishizu, Mokuba, Yugi, Ryou, Malik, and Otogi? holy cow! that's like the whole crew! But anyways, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! cya soon! BYE!
person NieniSprings
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM

*stares expectantly at the last page before screaching* HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT OFF THERE??! NOOOOOOO! CLIFF0HANGERS ARE EVILNESS! UP-A-MA-DATE-NESS, PLEASE!

*blinks*

..... Good story so far, I like it.