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go on... PLEASE!!!!
I LOVE you FF!

--> I´ve read it once on fanfiction.net , but I heard you have to "cut" a few scenes ^.~

so, pleeeaasseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... GO ON!!!

*kisses*
your Simyta

Fencing swords are generally called raipers. I don't know if they have another name, but that's usually it.
Poor Ryou! Skinned hands are a bugger, aren't they though??

Just as last time, fantastic, but your computer seems to change "ks tks to @. Check through it. ^_^

The nemo seagulls and Bakura have more in common than ever. They're both ultra stubborn and wont stop until they get what they want! (I know I'm evil. Now, where's my pithfork gone...........??)

PErson who cut Bakura's line.............ANZU!! KILL HER!! HANG FROMFROM THE POOP DECK!! Or something to that effect. If it wasn't her, do it anyway. I *Hate* Anzu

MORE PLEASE!!

wow...this fic is soooooo good!!

i'm a ups upset at the lack of Seto's appearance though......i'm a Seto/Ryou fan, but this story is really, really good!!!

Oh yeah, I just thought it sooo funny when, at the end of that last chapter there, you mentioned the two ships 'the Relinquished'. That's Pegasus' ship right? It's his card. Anyway, I personally liked the name and it's MY penname!

So now, i'm a ship. cooooooool!

anyway, continue!!!

(HMS) Relinquished - I couldn't resist!!!

this fic is great!

I'd like a bit more Seto in it though......please?? I'm a Seto/Ryou writer (infamous for it, actually), but I really, really enjoyed this fic! You gotta continue, ne??

Also, it's just me, but I found it hilarious that you named Pegasus' ship 'the Relinquished'. That's my penname, actually, named after Pegasus' card. I don't like Pegasus, but I like the name of the card.

Anyway, continue!!!

(the) Relinquished - sorry, could resist!!

This was a very good story so far please write more soon I want to see what malik does in the gallery.

HI!! Wonderful fic so far please keep writing if you do the crossover you mentioned im in favor of it!feel free to e-mail me if you want . who is your favorite yyh character? mine is kurama ( both froms)

Oooh, I love this fic! This is great great! I love how Bakura is such a hard-ass, but still a softy at the same time. Update really soon, okies? Good luck.

~Bambi

Great Story...just great!
LATER...

I hope you update soon. It's a great story. Give us more action between Yami and Yugi and a lot of Tea bashing, because you have been focused mainly in Ryou and Bakura's pairing. See ya soon!!!

i know i have asked you before, but for some weird reason, i can't go to the second chapter on the places you posted this story. By reading the first chapter, i can tell this is a really good story. so if you wouldn't mind, would you please email me the story. Thanks. bye.