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for Burning Sea

by hatochiisai

person Wicabeth
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've never become so hooked upon a story so fast! This is fantastic! Pleeeeeeeeease update soon! *clings to your legs*
person Yami Kitsune
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have to update this one too! I LOVE THIS ONE! You realy have to update. ^-^
person Chys
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic!


Chys
person EternalIcecube
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooo! This is like Silhouetted by the Sea by KristenElizabeth. If you like GundamWing you should read it (even though its not yaoi). Anyway, I'm enjoying it. I don't know if you meant to (but I think you did ^^) You used a line from Grease in the chapter where Tea was like... mashing her breasts in Ryou's breakfast (slut >O) and someone said the "What lady" line. Just an observation. God I hate that woman... I heart that you put Mai and Ishizu together. That's very awesome. I feel bad for poor Ryou. AND I HAVE A QUESTION! Did you change the pairings between Jou, Seto, Otogi and Honda because... at the beginning it was your typical Jou/Seto Otogi/Honda setup and then it... just changed somewhere XD Just wondering. Malik was being sexy, Ryou is being tortured (which is completely jake for him) but Yugi isn't in it as much. Yugi doesn't seem to be good at anything in particular, or you just haven't said anything yet XD Perhaps you shall prove me wrong! Rock on with ya bad self!
person Kat1132
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a heart breaking chapter. I can't wait till the next one. Update soon please!
person Lilie the mouse
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chops Seto and Otogi down* morons èé!!! Nice chapter once again :) Little Yugi got some!!!! :D Still can't wait for more. Excellent work and Ryou's mre "lonely" carries the whole emotion of the chapter. *bows*
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie!!..normally I wouldn't say this..but..Bakura deserves it if Ryou dies from fever! And Ryou would be better off! Actually all of them deserve it! Abandoning him like that!!! Well I at least hope Ryou is sick for awhile and when he does get better still hates Bakura! He killed his father and that was so harsh making him watch! or at least even if they end up together maybe have Ryou fall for someone else on the island first?..That would be really funny! and poetic...okay..well I think I am done ranting and throwing out ideas! I can't wait for the next update!!!
person Nocturne22
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SH**!!!!!!!! This is one of the best I've read so far! UPDATE soon and keep up the excellent work!
person Ladywolf_Terri
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Umm, review..all I can say is that it is great!! Wonderful even!! I can't wait for another update so I am hoping for one soon!! PLEASE!! I love how you did Ryou in this! not the weak person so many others make him out to be! *applauds* Wonderful!
person Lilie the mouse
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bounces madly* OH WHEEHEE!!!!!! here's another chapter!!! Fabulous, imagining Malik tellinghis story was highly e,joyable, the images dancing in my head. The story of Osiris, Isis, Horus and Seth has always been one of my favorite ones. One more reason to adore this chapter. As many other reader, I impatiently wait for more. A fine treat for a fine day :)