rate_review Reviews

ryou did good. that was a great way to get on Seto`s good side. I loved it. Keep up the great work.

(sorry about typos or anything I`m sick)

I've really enjoyed this fic so far. You have wonderful charioteers that are both realistic and likable. Your descriptions really paint a picture of the story and your plot is very original. I can't wait to see how this develops, particularly with Ryou and Bakura. I love the way you've done those two. How you've made Bakura distant and cold (but not too cold ^_^) and Ryou gentle but not helpless. I also like that you haven’t rushed their relationship too much. It will make for a more interesting story line. Good job and please keep up the good work.

Ethereal

YAY!!!! Ryou kicked ass!!! literally! Saved Seto and had Yami's back! Go Ryou!!!! Though I still think (even more so now) that Bakura needs his butt kicked or Ryou to just find someone better for him!!! Great chapter though and I can't wait for the next one!!

Hell: fuckin' BRILLIANT! PURE GENIUS! damn.
Heaven: oh yes very well done! I absolutley loved it! *round 'o plause*^^
Hell: battle scene was awsome. Probably my fav part. All that blood
and fighting and chaos *shivers* Delicious
Heaven: eh, r-right, anywhoo, we loved the way Ryou got some of the
action too. Instead of just sittin' there like a helpless idiot, you got him
kickin some--
Hell: kickin' some real good ass, baby!
Heaven: it was nice to see a little change.
Hell: hell fuckin' yeah!
Heaven: *sigh* i wish you wouldn't use such profanity. Anywho it would be GREATLY wanted
and apreciated if you update very soon.
Hell: i agree. Maybe soon Ryou will get some different action. Some very GOOD action
from Bakura. We'll be waiting.
Heaven: *smile* till' next time! Ja ne!

*faithfully reading* :)
.... you don't like poor Yugi, eh? :)

*Cackle!* TACKLE THE FLUFFY BUNNY OF DOOOOOOM!!!!Great story so far, my friend, keep up the good work

please up date!!!!very soon!!!

I loved this chapter. Keep up the good work. Not much to comment on in this one so I`ll leave it at this. I can`t wait for some lemons.
Which Ryou-Bakura site. I found tons. Send me the link. aubiset@sbcglobal.net.

Great chapter!!..Seto needs his butt kicked!!..stuck-up SOB.><....Glad Ryou isn't just falling into Bakura's arms like the other two did..Kura did way too much to hurt him!! Can't wait to see what comes next!

Bajura is British you dumb ass!! BRITISH!! From the fucking united kingdoms!