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Ooh, new chapter. It's my sister's bday now. *knows how Yami might feel* Hehe... time to trick her.... april fools day...

Hey, great fic! I totally love it! *beams* You've done very well and I've only seen a few errors, minus the insane/evil symbols; congrats! This is a really good story; I loved it from the first chapter! Definately loved the Ryou/Bakura action! *gives you a dozn roses of every color she can make when adding dye to red and white roses plus a jumbo box of pocky* I can't wait for the next chapter! When are they gonna find out who the traitor is? *has a sneaky feeling is Rex, Wevil, or Espa; or all three for that matter....* I really like Mikado and Ahmose...nice job! *laughs remembering Mikado with the club* I know it may bug you or prove to mess up something with the luck I have but could you pweeease, with a cherry on top of a XXX-Large tropical fruit smoothie with extra whip cream, do a Yami/Yugi lemon? I would love you; or more Bakura/Ryou or both...hell and Marik/Malik too...*is a yaoi obbsessed fan girl* Anyhow, you've done really well and you're one hell of an author in my opinion so keep up the good work! Never lose faith in your abilities because you have true talent! Write on!!!! ^_^

This is quite cute. There are a few things that could use fixing...some of the chapters with their odd characters but you already explained how that was...and a few grammer errors but otherwise this is awsome!
I love it!

??? What happened? I wonder what got him so horny. This was a very cool chapter but to short! Come on please update! I can't wait for the next chapter. Ja ne!! ^____^

Finally an update...I thought my favorite fanfiction writer had died :( I've been waiting and searching around for all sorts of updates...I got the ones for Tearing Down the Sky a while ago, but it took me forever to find an update for Burning Sea...please please please update again soon. I'm sure you're quite busy now since you are in college right? (no, I'm not stalking you...I just think that only a senior in high school or a college student or older person can write the things that you write...)

Anyways, update soon and please don't ignore the reviews...you reading them and responding makes me feel important. Well, won't waste more of your time. Ja!

Mia-Chan

I love your story!! I also see that it has been out for awhile, I wonder why I didn't see it earlier. >_> I wish I only had seen it sooner. *bows low* sorry. I hardly ever have time to read other's fanfics and I hate myself for it. But I managed to sneek in a read here and there! ^^v I love anything that has to do with the sea! ^^ You picked a great topic! And I cant' wait for the next chapter! update soon, okay? ^____^

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!

Figures that catching a beheaded chicken would make Bakura horny. Nice lemon there, typical of him : ) Good job : )

DracOnyx

Yumminess between Kura and Ryou! ^^

Can't wait to see what they do to Yami!

AWESOME!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!