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for Burning Sea

by hatochiisai

person Hikari Raine
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So short. Must have more

update soon
person The jellyfish
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I really loved it at first but I'm getting sick of Ryou getting it all in here. I was hoping for a little bit of Yami/yugi action but it's clear you don't intent to give them what you did for the other couples..... i'm out but still wishing you a good continuation for this *quick bowing*
person IYYashi
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Nothing fazes Yami huh? He was almost poisoned and now it's like Let's play Ryou! Cool. Well I seriously jumped for joy seeing that you updated! Yay! C ya!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So someone is out to kill all of them..hmmm..and hard to tell who...but I can't wait for the rematch!
person Angel Kawaii
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!! You have go to update faster. I love your story! I'll be waiting! Ja ne
person DracOnyx
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Someone tried to poison Yami! ACK! As for the rematch, I can't wait. that should be interesting.

Drac and her muse
person December Jewel
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! I have been waiting patiently for you to continue and for that rematch. Oh, that will be a good one! Please continue soon! ^_^
person December
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I loved it all! Oh, can't wait until the next chapter. Please continue soon! ^_^
person anubiset
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good.
person Nights Child
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Great! This is sooo cool! Please keep up the good work!