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Cannon balls! Those are heavy! I would expect Marik to be bawling like a baby after that. Who are the assholes that almost killed Marik?! Who! I'll rip their sorry throats out!

RD: grr ok now i give my final warning to the entire ship if i find out who tried to kill marik there ass is mine GOT THAT no and i mean no one touches my yamis and hikaris and lives hmph mark my words those who threaten there lives are threatening there own lives huh well hato keep up the great work hehe another good chaptor though i feel very sry for bakura yami and malik they almost lost there best friend/lover its not right at all they should not have to go through such a horrific ordeal well keep up the great work and update soon hato gtg now JA NE ^__^

I LOVE IT! Awsome writing, as always~ ^-^

I love the pairings you have, Bakura/Ryou are always a favorite of mine! I cant wait to see who the want to be murder is, actually I cant wait to see what Yami, Marik, and Bakura do to the would be murders! Especially if they try to hurt the "little ones", anyway keep up the good work...even though you like to leave us with evil evil cliffhangers!

Haha!! I love you so much! You rock my sox!! wah! Poor Marik! Who did it? I'll kill em! Bah, next chapter, please, I can't wait!

So good love it!! update soon please and thank you!!!!

THis chapter needs to be redone! Chapter eight! I can take all the other mistakes but this chapter is un readable.

*sigh* I stopped reading at chapter 10. I can't take it anymore. "these are quotation marks"

And all I have to say to that is two things. 1. AWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!! 2. Marik was right, it WAS about damn time! I was seriously wondering if they would ever do it!

Muehehehe...... Ryou got all pissy. I love it when he's pissy^^. And I love it when Yami is all diabolical. ^^ Diabolical-ness is fun ^^. And of course, Marik and Bakura screwing themselves senseless is a classic. Keep it up!