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YAAAY It was two chapters for me this time since I've not checked up on this site in a while...keep churning out those wonderful stories hato-chiisai-sama...hope your school work's going good. Update again soon!

Very good chapter! You hit three birds with one stone. Ryou, Bakura and Yami. This is getting very interesting. I'll be waiting for the next update. Ja ne! ^^

Oh, wow! Definitely cool! Continue soon! Of course, after you take the exam and everything! ^_^

RD: ok this is getting out of hand what ever grudge these guys have towards yami marik and bakura is getting way to dangerous as if there werent already i mean not only did bakura get hurt but yami and ryou as well grr this has to end NOW now its time to get dead serious about this we know it wasnt ryou malik or yugi neither one of those boys would EVER want to see there love hurt and i know that seto otogi jou and honda and of course mokuba would not hurt them in a million years keith is iffy cuz well hes got no good bone in his body he prooved that at duelist kingdome when he used those boys to get star chips for himself cuz he clearly wasnt good enough to get invited weevil and rex are another two that cant be trusted weevil would kill his own mother if it meant getting something in return and rex is too stupid to not know how wrong it is to hurt someone espa nah i cant see him doing it even if he was a cheat hes not hardly as bad as weevil now that leaves the rest of the crew and tea now she might be the one responsible the way she sees it if she cant have yami know one can and shes vindictive enough to pull something like that the only other person i know would not do something that horrible is Mako cuz hes an honorable man to bones and soul never would he let his hands get tainted with foul play and blood no so that leaves tea keith weevil and rex and the other members of the crew hmm but the question is who and more importantly why why would they want to kill them very men who gave them freedom freedom away form those greedy pigs and dirty filthy bitches that call themselves our monarchy when all there care about is money and sex honeslty there like medievel prostitutes the only ones who were just as bad were the bastards who had the nerve to say they were the voice of god ya voice of god my ass were ALL the voice of god cuz we are pieces of his being given physical forms so no single person can be the ONLY voice of god cuz last i checked it went as follows the Father God the Son Jesus and the Holy Spirit US huh sry Hato but im angry for obvious reasons and when i find the culprit behind these attacks mark my words Yamis punishments will seem like paradise by the timei get my hands on them they will wish there never laid a hand in the means of harm upon any of them hmph well keep up the great work hato gtg now JA NE ^__^ and remember to update

arrows!? *sobs* man will the conspiracy never end?! Is it weevil? Is it Seto's Yami? wait..he's not on board --It's bandit keith!!!!!!!

things are heating up and i want more so update!

as soon as you can

Ja ne

*grins* sometimes i can be so demanding heh go figure

I can be patient! ^_^
It'll give me time to figure out who it is that's trying to kill them. t first I though Rex and Weevil but that's not possible since they were in the cabin while all this was going on. . . I'm thinking Keith. But I guess I'll have to wait patiently and see.
Great chappy! ^_^

I really lilke your story. I like how long the each chapters are. When you update please email me and let me know at erinthacker@comcast.net and please update when you can and keep up the great work.

no no no!!! i have to know who's trying to kill my beloved Marik!!!! *anguished sobs*

*winks* thanks for fixin' it dearie! You've got a steller fic here!

Sugoi! You've finally updated! ^_^ So the plot thickens! I wonder who did it? Poor Marik and Bakura!