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*gapes at screen* fuck me dead.. now THAT is what i call a twist *still ACTUALLY gaping*
Noo, dont kill Ryou.. or anyone for that matter. Omg *so nervous* Do you promise not to kill anyone in the fic. Cept maybe Tea and Keith ATCH! *hates them* So thats that, you cant kill anyone!.. cept.. them, them being tea and keith..not the others....like i said... *confuses self*
Errm... I cannot get over it. Great chapter. Im hoping your plan was to have people gape at the computer screen after reading because.. fuck me ive never gaped so hard in my LIFE!
Poor little Ryou, hes no whore.
Omg poor Malik. WTF SETO?!? How is it Malik o.0
Omg poor everyone.. ahh. They must escape. Oh I know.. the others will come save them right? They'll send the parrot.. bird... THING to let them know? But theres no way they would make it.. *squeak* Eee.. OH GODS YOU MUST UPDATE!

Just like all your other stories , this ones GREAT !!!!! I was so happy that you updated . And now I’m on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next !!
I had a feeling Keith was involved because you seem to like making him the bad guy . He dose fit the part well . But I was wondering why Malik never had a murder attempt happen to him . Is he just lucky or is there something on the horizon for him ???????
And oooow boooy is Bakura gonna be mad when he wakes up . But at lest Yugi and Malik aren’t alone on the ship .
Great chap. Update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well..the anzu betraying part was kinda obvious, i kinda thought it was going to be the bug guy, not kieth ^^;; omg the light just turned off >_O eerie...update soon =]

Keith and Tea!!!!!!!!!!!! I shoulda known! Those two slimey characters! Must kill them...they made Ryou cry. They made the others sad. Bad bad characters- they deserve to die a slow painful death!

Anyways great job. I loved this chapter! Update soon again! I can't wait for more!!

~IceAngel~

wow an update already *jumps up and down* and i hope its not long for another. Anyway i didn't think there were 2 betrayers but i knew Tea was a betrayer. So was the demotion of Bakura and Marik fake? i hope it was. i can't believe both Yami and Marik are mistaking Ryou for Bakura but over all it was great chappie. Please update soon

This fic is totally alsome! I hope you update soon!

RD: grr GOD DAM THAT FUCKING SLUT ASS BITCH AND THAT TWO TIMING BACK STABBING MURDEROUS BASTARD (sry but im pissed and beyond angry) HOW DARE U BETRAY YAMI MARIK AND BAKURA THIS WAY OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH I CANT WAIT TILL BAKURA GETS HIS HANDS ON THOSE TWO THEY ARE SOOO DEAD FUCKING WROTTING COPRSE SOON TO B GOING DOWN TO DAVY JONES LOCKER huh ok now im done shouting time to torture *grabs her scimitars and starts slicing tea and keith to ribbons again and again and again over and over for at least what seems like 50,000 yrs but i just altered time for that brief bit to make it so it seemed like i tortured them with my swords for that long when really it was only 50 seconds then restores them and hurdles the most lethal of poisons and toxins and acids at tea and keith till there nothing but pools of blood and flesh then she restores them again and for the last time and sends them bothe so much fear they crack and then extracts there souls to torment for eternity* ok im done but oooooooooooh thank GOD ryou nocked Bakura on concious THANK YOU RYOU *glomps her second fav hikari next to yugi* THANK U THANK U THANK U if wasnt for u there would be no way for the DM to get there captain and second mate along with Bakura's lover back safetly but instead he can save them YAY and since its Kura who gets to dish out the punishment u can bet it will be excrutiating grr bitch i hope she gets infected with the worst disease known to men for being such an ugly slut and u keith WROT I GOD DAM HELL U SOB man do i wish HE suffered at the hands of Katrina let him be taken down by illness and heat stroke that would teach him U GOD DAM MOTHER FUCKING PIECE OF CAMMEL SHIT huh ok im calm im relaxed hehe sry bout that but as u can tell im PISSED >___< huh but still great chappie now that i know y Yami did all that even though he did kinda go a wee bit far on someone who just saved one his bf from being captured now he owes Ryou BIG time for this one huh gtg now JA NE and update soon nd keep up the great work

Wow, great plot twist! Nice to see that Yami hasn't lost his marbles completely, although he may wish he had now that he's heading towards execution. Can't wait to see how Yugi, Bakura, and Malik save their loves! Write more soon please!

I hope Yugis okay!!
I cannot believe Yami would do that. Its not like Yami HAD to watch Bakura and Ryou (and Marik) fuck. And now.. now they're going to have to stay with the crew.. EW! OMG! THEY"RE GOING TO DIE ARENT THEY! Ive worked it out. They will have to stay with the crew, and the evil dudes will KILL THEM IN THEIR SLEEP! Then Yami will blame himself (so he sould) and kill himself, leaving Yugi the ship and he'll be the new captian.. OMG NO! IM GIVING YOU IDEAS! DONT YOU DARE WRITE THAT *cries* Yami hurt Ryou.. omg i bet he hurt Kuras arm when he pushed him. What about Malik? Does he blame him too. How could he! THEY WERENT EVEN THERE!
*spazz* Oh oh.. Yugi will make Yami take them back.. yeah.. thats what will happen. Yugi will convince him. He was just upset cos Yugi was hurt.. thats it. But in the meantime. AH! They're going to die *sobs*
PLEASE UPDATE and put me out of my misery. but dont kill them. Make Yami take them all back.. with open arms. So they can hug.
*still crying*

OMGWTF!?! How awful. How he blame Kura and Marik AND RYOU for what happen.. omgwtf! *is shocked*

Okay soo.. im assuming this is some kind of angry sudden thing that will change back right..? *is so cut* Poor Ryou. Yami hurt-ed heeem
Good chapter anyways. Write more soon.. so you can leik have the un-demoted.. or.. something *shrugs*




*still not over it* stupid Yami.