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Ooooooo, you devil tease!...^-^...you did a great job starting from where you left off! I totally thought it was Seto that was the traitor...(course with that last scene, my suspicions still remain to be qualmed)...though, it's nice that he's there to comfort him...I'm surprised Yami, Marik, and even Ryou didn't get a chance to scuffle before they were knocked out and captured!...but everything is getting ~sooooo~ good! Awesome job! I can't wait until the next chapter!...*squeals* I'm just so glad to see an update! I love this story! Ja! ^_^

*on hands and knees, begging* please update soon. your story is getting better and better every chapter. its weird though how the crew got Bakura and Ryou mixed up but what's going to happen to Ryou, Yami and Marik? *tears in eyes* Yami and Marik will be shocked if not more than Ryou being captured instead of Bakura. I suppose thats good when you've got a twin. anywhoo UPDATE SOON or SUFFER MY WRATH

Yay! Another great chapter! And a quick update too! Please continue soon!

WAII~ update soon i wanna know if Bakura can save his beloved Ryou and his friends!!!! Waii~

Fabulous! Very sweet ending, it was a great way to showcase the emotions of Bakura, without being overwhelming. Should be interesting with the trial! Please write more soon!

Please continue I am dying to know what happens!!!!! Please don't make me beg! Its very good though! I love Marik, and Bakura !!!!!! Please tell me what happens!!

Wow! Hope this is updated again soon loved it! Well I need sleep!
Chrono: You don't sleep your a corsair!
Anira:*rolls eyes* Everyone sleeps sometime!
Sessh:She is right.
Anira:Anyway please update soon or I willl never sleep trying to guess what will happen next!

RD: I never thought id be doing this but *glomps Bakura* YAY the KING OF THEIVES HAS RETURNED heheh i knew it those scumbags will regret EVER crossing the three most notorious children of the night Yami Marik and Bakura will see to there defeat in the most satisfying way till the whole world is begging at there feet hehe huh i just hope Yami and Marik figure out that Ryou is with them and keep as good an eye on him as possible gods bless that brave soul he makes me so proud grr when the time comes im going to be having my own battle ill unlease every single last God of Norrath AND the Egyptian god cards as well as all the monsters at my disposal all of spain will tremble at the might i throw at them huh well gtg now JA NE ^__^ keeup the great work and update soon please i have to see them get back to there lives safe and sound

Whoohoo! That was awesome! Very suspenseful...I was sure Yami wouldn't be that bitchy without reason! Huzzah! Update soon--and I'm glad it wasn't anyone cool, the traitors, I mean...seems fitting that Keith and Tea would attempt mutany.

anyway, keep up the good work!

Thunder

This story is really really awesome. I love the plot and the setting and just all of your awesome writing talent. Please please please update more, this worry is killer. Again awesome job with the previous 25 chapters.