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Hello, I just loooove this story. I wasn't sure that i was going to like this at first..I'm used to stories with Yugi as a boy 9evil grin). I keep returning to see if you have written more. I can't wait to see what will happen next !!! I enjoyed the shower scene in the other chapter(snicker) pleasse keep the story going I can't wait for chap. 11!!!

Great story! Very diverse with a fantastic plot! Can't wait to read more!

*Happy sigh* This fic is amazingly good - probably the most realistic sudden-mystical-sex-change fic I've ever read, in any fandom. I really love your characterizations, particularly Yami, and Yuugi and Yami's relationship. :) I also love your Aznu, not a lot of people really bother to do anything constructive with her. And I especially love the way you manage to keep Yuugi masculine despite him being a girl, when so many other fics manage to effeminate him while keeping his gender intact. Kudos to you! :)
In the interest of constructive criticism, your fic could probably use a good beta reader, just to smooth out some of that grammar and formatting - and maybe it's just me, but while I can accept all the cursing as a stylistic decision, I really can't see Yuugi saying 'Dude' all that often. ;b The only other complaint I have (and this is really nit-picky) is that the 'evil bitch' in the first few chapters came off just a bit Mary-Sueish, of the variety that even the author hates. I can see how you tried to avoid that, with the insanity and the only vague descriptions and all, so maybe it's just me again... *shrugs*
Anyway, I really look forward to the next update. This is definately one of the best Yu-Gi-Oh fics I've read so far, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take it from here. Update soon! (It's required I say that, right? Or is that just in the Harry Potter fandom?) :)

Oh man, a gender-bending story that's actually *good*... I'll have to finish reading this later.

Hey Sean. Not only in spirit but here as well. I love AFF and well, yeah. Cool chapter... not like expect anything less from you. I got a couple giggles out of Ryou being a chick-magnet. That's something you don't see everyday.... hmmm. I stand by my philosophy that it is always the quiet ones. Me being a quiet one myself, or at least I used to be.

Keep up the great work You know I like Yami as a Asshole

Yami: Yeah I know you do -_- you just make me a asshole most the time bitch
Af: Shut up you cum licker
Yami: ok that's it I'm out of here *walks away*
AF: Sorry his in a moon must be that time of the month keep it up ok your a great writer

ACIDFLOWER

RD:hey red here nice ficcy definitly new *glares fire like eyes and growls ferociously*GOD DAMIT YAMI THE BOY IS IN MORTAL PAIN BOTHE INSIDE AND OUTSID AND YET YOU DO NOTHING TO HELP HIM YOUR TRULY ARE THE MOST RUTHELESS HEARTLESS MOST SELF CENTERED CONCIETED BASTARD IVE EVER HAD THE DISPLEASURE OF KNOWING HOW CAN U TURN ON YUGI WHEN HE NEEDS YOU THE MOST HERE*hands him a dagger*take this and kill yugi with it since its obvious you dont love him anymore and he is going to die eventually of a broken heart why not put bothe of yourselves out of your misery hell ill do it for you Yami you selfish bastard you hurt him anymore then you have and i swear by all hells demons ill kill and revive you again only to kill in and endless cycle till you wish for death but i wont give it for ill have you die for every piece of yugis heart your stomping on DAMIT YAMI DROP THE PRIDE CANT YOU SEE ITS HURTING YOU ALL DESTROY IT DAMIT GET RID OF IT CANT YOU SEE IT WAS BECAUSE OF YOUR PRIDE YOU NEARLY LOST YUGI IN HIS DUEL WITH KAIBA AND YET YOU STILL LET IT RULE YOU RA FUCKING DAMIT YAMI KILL THE PRIDE BEFORE IT KILLS YOU OR WORSE YOUR HIKARI HOW COULD YOU LIVE WITH YOURSELF KNOWING YOUR LOVE DIED OF A BROKEN HEART AND THAT YOU WERE THE ONE RESPOSINIBLE JUST GET OUT OF MY SITE YOU WORTHLESS SELF CENTERED PREJUDICE JERK AND STAY AWAY FROM YAMI well thats all for now so TTFN TA TA FOR NOW

i want another chapter please

Wow, tis ris really good! I love it. Please continue soon. ^_^

How are you not getting more reviews for this, I really like it please update .
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I'll be waiting for it