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for Under the Mistletoe

by sharem

person SailorAurora
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awww, that was so sweet. ^.^
and I love a mystery like this.. hehehe. makes for a intersting read. keep it up! ^.^ and of course, put in more hints.. :D
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL I still thinkn its Seto Kabia. Please write more soon.
person Lancer Monna
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! It was really sweet. I really enjoyed it and I hope to read more soon!!
person Misty
schedule October 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful update! I think I know who it is, but I probablly don't.. *sighs* If only it were Yami.. but.. Yuugi doesn't love him like that... *sighs* Oh well.. I'll just have to wait and see.. like everyone else.. Once again wonderful chapter! I love long ones.. ^~

Misty
person Neko Taka
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*smiles* This is truly a great story, and I can't wait to read more. I think I'm suddenly in the Christmas spirit now ^_^ You're a very good writer. Keep up the good work. Ja!
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I forgot about Malik. Maybe its him. Please write more soon.
person DracOnyx
schedule October 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm gonna take a shot in the dark as to who it is . . . reviewing the clues, it's someone with money to spend, who knows Yugi, also knows ancient egyptian, was NOT at duelist kingdom, wants Yugi to trust him (which means it's someone Yugi usually wouldn't), and is generally an interesting individual. The only person I can come up with to fit all those clues, is our dear blonde egyptain with lilac eyes. So, can't wait to read more.
person SailorBluestar
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWWW!!! Now I want to see chappy 5. I think it's Malik, unless of course, it's Marik. Hehehehehe. But I wanted it to be either Seto or Yami. Damn it Yami, why didn't you have a fortune, or a sibling? Even though you love Yugi as a lover, while he loves you like a brother. Hey! That rhymes!

Yami: Baka.

Yugi: Be nice.

Yami: *blushes*

Awwwww.... Come on Seto, don't let Malik win this! Snatch Yugi's heart. I know you can do it!

Seto: Baka.

Hey!
person Camille
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is frustrating! It's Ryou, isn't it! If it's Noa, I am running for the hills!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule October 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWW I really love your writing and this fic
Please more soon
and thank you for the review hon

ACID