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I have three guesses. Two of which are obivious, one that comes from nowhere. Of course Malik and Seto would be everyone's guess. I got one that, well, the person ain't even in the story, but its still possible. Duke Devilin. Yes, dice man. He is not in the story, most of the clues don't even apply, but its possible. We don't know anything about him, so it could be made up... right? Oh and I though Ryou was another possible, but he dosen't have a sibling as far as I know of. I guess it all falls on Marik. That's the most logical choice anyway. Hey if you wanna get real expensive in your gift idea's why not have C.A. buy Yugi a car? Oh another one could be a painting of some kind, have a well know made-up artist make a painting for C.A. or a painting that exist's for real with some meaning for this story.

AWWWWWWWWWW hmmm that was like so cute ^________^ love this fic makes me all smiles
more soon Jenn

RD:*is dancing to the song were in heaven from her divinx player*your that i want when u lie here in my arms i finding it hard to believe were in heaven
BRD:um RD *points to fanfic review

RD:*turns around and sees what BRD is pointing at*AH woops ^__^ sry um well once more a lovely chappy to this fic really sweet and neat that yugi has so many ppl who are affectionate towards him hehe duke,malik,and yami and at least seto is being nice for once in his life oh and happy to help with the two gifts the figure and the neck collar i thought those were neat ideas of mine and it brings me great happiness to know that i helped in some way

BRD:ya that was cool that my sisters ideas got into your fic thanks for using it and your welcome for the ideas and i second RDs notion on the chappy hehe well keep up the great work

RD:yes keep it up we want to know who C.A. is cuz we can narrow it somewhat cuz its not anyone who was at duelist kingdom so we can scracth out seto,ryou,bakura,um weevil,rex,mai,pegasas(thank Ra),umbandit keith tea joey tristan, and yami (darn)so that leaves um duke and who else is in ygo that wasnt at duelist kingdom hmm well that dosnt help too much cuz i cant remember everyone yugi encounters after duelist kingdome and almost all of them were his enemy hmm well KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK heheh well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^______~

*sheepish look* Ah. No trouble at all. Sorry i ranted at you like that but it's something that really bugs me.

I have a question. IS EVERYONE AND THEIR MOTHER HITTING ON YUGI!?!? Don't they have any other love interests? Their's Malik, Yami, Otogi and Bakura!!! Who's next? Marik!??!?

Don't you dare!

On second thought i dare you to put Marik in this fic and have him hit on Yugi! *snickers* That would actually be rather interesting.

Please update soon. I'm loving this fic to bits!

I LOVE THIS STORY. I still don't know who C.A. is.. please write more, this stroy rocks!!!!

WOOT! Another chapter done, another gift and clue. Hmmm . . . Malik or Marik are sounding more and more like the C.A . . . although I think it's Malik, to be honest. But I had a horrifying thought . . .could it be Noa? I have no idea what his connections are to anything (damn WB and thier backa##'d way of showing episodes!). At any rate, I stick to my belief that it's Malik . . . and if it is, you are going to be in for a huge glomph! I've wanted to write a pairing with him and Yugi/Yami, but I haven't quite gotten the guts to write a Yaoi story yet. Love to read them, think I would be horrid at writing them *shrug* anyway, more chapters please . . . I'm dying to find out who it is!

i don't know if you already got this suggestion but i want to review anyways because your story has to be the best yugi centered story i have read so far on adultfanfiction! you make my day everytime i read a new chapter because i absolutly LOVE yugi stories! it does matter who h wit with (as long as it's not anzu) then i will read eveyone one. but there isn't that many stories out there with a different pairig besides yami/ yugi or seto/ yugi, so that is why i can not wait to who who the christmas angel is! i think it might be malik but you've also twists so that i really don't who it is and that's great because it keeps me reading. anyways, back to the present. what if the C.A. gave yugi a pet like a dog, and said something like "so you will never have to be loney again..." ok... so maybe not saying something quite like that but i hope you get my idea. i can't wait for the next chapter which i'm sure will be awesome!! good luck writing!

DAMN THAT TEASER!!!!! Damn. Now I want the next chappy. Why do you torture us so? Why?

Yugi: Is she always this dramatic?

Kurama: Since you're new inside her psycho mind, yes. Yes she is. It's terrible I know. I'd suggest you depart while you still can.

Yami: What do you mean?

Kurama: She has yet to give you a title. Therefore, you're still free to flee her mind.

Yugi: And your title is?

Kurama: Her insightful muse. It's too late for me, but not for you.

OI! Kurama, don't be scaring my muses away. I may need them. :)

Yami: O.o'

Anyway, I want more!!! Too bad Yami's not the Christmas Angel. I was really hoping it to be him. Or Seto. And I don't think Mokuba will be doing this. Doesn'und und like it. Malik doesn't seem like the Christmas Angel either. Pegasus doesn't have a sibling does he? *shudders at the thought* What about Duke? These guys gotta be bazillionaires, but I don't think they have siblings. I wonder if it's still Malik after all... All clues point to him, yet, his actions in this chapter... GAAAAAAHHH!!!

Another wonderful chapter. Out of curiousity . . . are you treating Malik and Yami Malik as two seperate people in this one? just a curiousity . . . and on that note, some of your reviewers have guessed correctly eh? hmmm . . . might have to dig through the reviews . . . naw, that would spoil the fun. I'll just wait to see if it is who I think it is.
Anyway, can't wait for more.

*eyebrow twitches* Ok. I love the fic. It's sweet, fluffy, sappy and all that. I would love to read more but there's one thing. *eyebrows twiches again* The language spoken in Egypt is not 'Egyptian' it's Arabic. Got that? How do i know? I WAS BORN AND RAISED THERE, THAT'S HOW!!!!! Do you have any idea how annoying it is to have people come up to you and ask 'S som some Egyptian!' They don't even ask pely!ely! *mutters a few curses*

So, for future reference the language uis Arabic not 'Egyptian'. *eyebrow twitches once more*

Oh yeah! *grins* One more thing! I think i've figured out who the Christmas Angel is! I figured it out after reading chappie 2 or 3. This is the first time i've ever read a pairing like that at least i think it is going top be that pairing...

More soon please! ^_^