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for Under the Mistletoe

by sharem

person ssj4sailormenz
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's so sweet! Are you going to update soon? Please say you will! I can't wait for more!

More soon please!
person Tash
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love this story, it's great but please update! You cant leave us hanging like this!
person sombra
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Is it marik or bakura i think its marik.
person Shinigami24
schedule December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*shudders* The horror, the horror! Pls don't let CA be Pegasus! Cuz I heard that he's maybe in his 30-40s! Waay too old for Yugi! Cuz I just read the reviews and about 2 others just suggested Pegasus... Anyway, I think CA is Malik, I fighured it out when I read chappie 5...And Marik likes Ryo... Poor guy...Bakura's gonna be POD!!! How will Yugi set them up? He's got his hands full with Seto, Bakura, Duke and CA... I think Malik likes Yugi... But i have yet to see him make his move, unless he's CA!!! I think Yami likes Yugi, cuz he's awfully protective of him! And he knows who CA is, but he isn't talking! *glares at Yami* And did Tea total Yugi's car? Cuz she would have a motive... And I cannot see Bakura or Marik doing something like that... I think they'ld prefer to do it face to face, and they'ld have let it slip by now...Anyway, pls bring Mokuba in the story! Only pls don't make him like Yugi, make him be a friend like Joey!
person AloeVera
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My vote's for seto or pegasus
person ShadowofLight
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I ahve been reading this story from start to finish and I must say... this is one of the most beautiful thigns I have ever read!! Such poetry and gifts! Now I wish i had someone like that in my life! Tea was totally not being fair and Marik... well he's sjut beyond creepy. ANyway I love this story! Each chapterI want to reread over and over. I think I know who Yugi's admirer is but I don't want to jump the gun jsut yet. Please oh please update soon!! I ato kto know what the other gifts are adn everyone reaction!! Oh yeah, will Ryou hook up with psycho marik? Hell does he even like hte guy as a friend?? Hee love this story so very much!!
person Nicky
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a great story. Don't leave it here, please continue!
person Anon
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I am looking forward to new chapters
person DracOnyx
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*dances around on her tip-toes* It's Malik, It's Malik, It's Malik . . .

Sephiroth - *shaking his head* Cat, I don't suppose you know why she's like that, do you?

Catherine - *shrugs* Seph, Drac's an odd one . . . and you of all people should know what she's like when she's obsessed.

Sephiroth - Yes, you are right. It seems she is enjoying this story immensly.

Catherine - No kidding . I haI haven't seen her this excited since she started getting reviews for Starlight and Shadows.

DracOnyx - *stops dancing and sits back down at the computer* Oh shut up you two. Anyway, I'm obviously loving the story, and can't wait for more. And don't mind my muse and my alter-ego . . . they're just moping cause I've been in a writing slump lately. Can't wait to read more : )
person SailorBluestar
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
He got a ring! And pretty flowers! And I absolutely adore the teaser. Though, this means I WANT MORE!!!! What's this about Seto like YAMI?!? Hehehehehehehe. MUST. GET. NEXT. CHAPTER.