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for Under the Mistletoe

by sharem

person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RD:sheesh Yami supicious much i mean i secret admirers intentions arent normally ment to hurt someone there normally ment to show affection sheesh and yugi is happy and i know your a jealous old pharaoh but still as you've seen none of the gifts are dangerous and none are nothing but sweet littlkenskens of affection which happen to be highly expansive and very fitting for yugi so come on put the jealousy aside and just keep up your vigilance thats all be the guardian angel u have been for yugi and if this guy does intend to hurt yugi u can hurt him back with my expressed permision and i wont stop you but until then drop the jealousy act and let yugi have his special moment its not every day somone wishes to show their affection to an angel by buying him wonderful little gifts and yugi seems to be happy with it so as ive said YOU SHOULD TO meany well great fic even if u it practically took u forever but im not complaining too much anyways just keep up the good work and why cant u let reviewers help cuz i told ya my email does not work at all hoy well i have an idea for a present its up to you but u could get yugi a new car or something that would really shock little yugi well TTFN ta ta for now
person Rae
schedule October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think I know who it is!!! Can I guess? It's....Yami Bakura!!!! He would know all about Yugi and how the Dark Magician is his favorite card...Email me if I'm right!
person Cherreh
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I want it to be YAMI! Please? *chibi eyes* Wonderful story and very well written also. :) Wish my writing could be like that...

~~~Cherry~~~
person Chibi Peter Pan
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THAT IS ONE OF THE CUTEST THINGS I'VE EVER READ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MUST HAVE MORE CUTENESS -dies of cuteness many times over-
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Is it Seto or Mokubo? They are the only to richest games in the show!! Please write CH 3 soon.
person Misty
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. A cute dark magician necklace! I want one! ^___^ This story is sweet.. Okay.. SooOOOoo- it isn't a she? Hmm.. I wonder.. *evil glint sparkles in Misty's eyes* Heh heh ha ha.. ^^"

Misty
person SailorBluestar
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think it's Seto. Judging by reactions, I claim Seto. Though I was secretly hoping for Yami. *sigh* Hmmm...more gifts you say? You've got the plushie and pendent. Man, guys are soooo hard to shop for! I'd say tie, but that'd be soooo tacky. I guess you could go for leather, nice form fitting leather. But that could be later when the mysterious christmas angel gives kinky stuff like belts, chains, and handcuffs. Mmmm...Bondage Yugi...
person Kookie
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* this is so cute! and yar, Yugi is by far the most NAIVE bishie i no froO...O....holy crap...XD continue the story!! gogo!!!o!!!!
person Miaka
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I really hope you would update the next chapter ASAP! I can't wait to know who the mysterious person is!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: This is really good!
YD: Hmmmm...I want to say it's Seto.
DD: I have a bad feeling it's Joey.
YD: That's bad?
DD: For Mai it is.
YD: True.
DD: Keep up the good work!