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for Under the Mistletoe

by sharem

person Funkegirl
schedule October 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story. And yes, long chapters are good. Long chapters are very good. Can't wait to see what other gifts pop up, and to what lengths Yami will go to find out who Christmas Angel is.
person Kookie
schedule October 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mwaha! it's seto!! IT'S SETO!!! IT HAS TO BE SETO!!!! XD~~ This is so cute, PLEEEAASE continue XD
person LancerMonna
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so adorable and very well written. I especially love thole ole ten days before christmas theme. It's so touching. The suspense is killing me, even though I think I know who"Christmas Angel" is. Keep up the great work. I look forward to the next chapter. (I hope that you put up a new chapter soon.)

Lancer Monna
person Midnight_Yaoi
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The next present could be a specially designed Dark Magician card with real gold trim and a display plaque...

Or maybe a pair of expensive fluffy DM house slippers...

Or...or... Maybe something like what I'd give him.

If I had all the money in the world, I'd buy him a boquette of amethyst colored roses and give him
a cute little poem to go with it. Something like: "With time, roses will wilt away, but my love is everlasting."
person Shakster
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's so cute!!!!! Nice to read a fic that's not so heavy on the angst every once and a while, not that I don't love angsty fics....Anyway, I'm not sure what your ultimate plan for the story is thus far, so far what you've done is woful,ful, I think though there should be at least one interaction with each potential suitor, so we can kind of see how they act around Yugi... It would add a little more mystery too an already mysterious story, not that I'm not as anxious as everyone else to find out who it is already...The strength of this lovely story is the mystery: everyone has their favorite pairings, but since we don't know who Yugi's crush is we can all imagine who we'd want it to be... and in the end, even if it's not the person we hoped for...we're already rooting for our mystery man....But I digress, it's simply lovely.
person ~kye~
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kye~ITS NOT YAMI!! ITS NOT YAMI!! XD fwee! i HAS to be seto..hes rich..or maybe its malik! hehee...He seems liek a rich dude wearing all his jewelery and stuff..hmmm..Seto..or Malik? am i right?! or Marik? mokuba? ARE OF TOF THESE RIGHT?! I MUST KNOW! *is going into shock*
Yami Kari~ O_o;; erm..contiue! n.n;;
Kye~ AND TELL ME IF IM RIGHT!!
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM

i got a guss its eather seto or serinty or a fic charcter
who knows [except the author]
schedule October 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Its Seto Kaiba!! It has to be!!!! Please write more soon.
person Tegasus
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic story! I can't wait for the next chapter! I especially like what you're doing with the title chapters! ^_^
person SailorBluestar
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm...well, since the Christmas Angel is a guy, has met Yugi, and has a sibling, I believe we have three choices to choose from.

Malik: Me. Ishizu's my big sis remember. And with her cash, I can get a lot of things.

Joey: Me. Serenity's my little sis. Though, I don't think I've got the cash for those kinds of gifts.

Seto: Or me. Mokuba's my little brother. So obviously if I told him the gender of my sibling, I would give myself away. And I am a billionaire.

My vote's for Kaiba! I can't wait until the next chappy comes out. Give me more!!!!