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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GREAT AWSOME and SO SEXY and HOT! Can't wait for the lemon Hope it's as GOOD or BETTER as what I just red HURRY UPDATE SOON!!!
LATER...
LATER...
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
absolutly amazing!
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I got a good laugh in this chapter. I like how you made Jou's dad. Most fictions have him so abusive, others have him raping Jou, this one is better. I really like it.
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: *sobs* THE LAST CHAPTER NEXT!!!
Yami: *winced* uh oh, now your in for it
Me: HOW COULD U?! TRY 2 MAKE A SEQUAL FOR IT
Yami: koi, its not your choice to make the author what to do
Me: but i'm suggesting some things
Yami: *laughs* all right koi *kisses me and leaves room*
Me: damn her, i'm so in luv with my Yami. PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND MAKE IT QUICKLY!!! HURRY!!! *leaves room quickly*
Yami: *winced* uh oh, now your in for it
Me: HOW COULD U?! TRY 2 MAKE A SEQUAL FOR IT
Yami: koi, its not your choice to make the author what to do
Me: but i'm suggesting some things
Yami: *laughs* all right koi *kisses me and leaves room*
Me: damn her, i'm so in luv with my Yami. PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND MAKE IT QUICKLY!!! HURRY!!! *leaves room quickly*
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-runs around- actually...i got a kick outta joey's dad this time around! ^_^ good chap! yes yes, got me droolin ^-^ ~Leaf~
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow his dad is messed up huh? *gg* ^.^ It was somewhat funny scene though...damn the lemony stuff in the alley was getting good! I really really hope you update SOOON! I want my lemon dangnabit! ^______^ Other than that this was a great chappy! ^.^ MORE MORE SOOOON! Arigato! Ja ne!
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for CH 4. Can you make Joey's dad an asshole again? I love it when Seto saves his puppy like a knight in shinning armor. ^_^
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October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You must be as eager as your readers for that lemon if you managed to skip the mansion house chapter, very clever putting jou's father in there! First time i've seen him as a nice drunk. hope you update soon.
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October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good work. This story seems to really catch my interests.
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October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe seto liked the movie... I love the fact that jou was havin dirty thoughts cause seto whispered in his ear and I hope seto "helps" out out later : 3 hehe... just woke up sorry for the incoherence... I CASN'T WAIT FOR CH3!
*will definetly check this weekend* i won't be mad if its not up.. i know how it is getting stuff out but *twitches* seto/jou...need more...
*will definetly check this weekend* i won't be mad if its not up.. i know how it is getting stuff out but *twitches* seto/jou...need more...