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for Wisdom Teeth

by hatochiisai

person Anon
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I remember gettin my wisdom teeth takin out and I was fightin the gas and I looked over at the corner and saw KURAMA! *drools* he had on a white buttoned up shirt three buttons down and jeans and told me to relax and it would all be over soon, and so I did and the next thing I new I was wakin up and couldnt move my mouth much.

Ryou: *pouts* WHY couldnt I have seen my Baku in a thong tellin me that!?

Bakura: =OO= Ry..Ryou...

Ryou: *blinks innocently* What?

N.N: >< ITS A LIE THAT INNOCENT BLINK IS SUCH A LIE!

Ryou: *glares*

N.N: *grins* Damn Ryou...you were kinky! Takin Baku in front of the others....woot!

Marik: I know..FREE PORN!

Malik: *smacks Marik in the head*

Yami: Umm...Yugi maybe when you get your teeth pulled we could try somethiing like this.

Yugi: *Grins* Why wait?

Yami: Wha-*is tackled by Yugi*

Yugi: I CANT WAIT! *nibbles along Yami's neck* GIVE ME SOME OF THAT! *nibbles at Yami's lips* AND SOME OF THIS!

N.N: *giggles* Lovly story, enjoyed readin!
person Harpie Yamazaki
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN that was a long one-shot! But, it was one of the most amusing I've ever stumbled across. Ryou mood swings... nice. XD Great writing, you've become one of my favorites!
person akako mae
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lmao funny story i love it ^^ ryou with mood swings is the best ^^ good job on the fic ^^
person sweetmisery
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, and it works as a one-shot and a chapter story
person Shinigami24
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*winces* Ouch! I know how Ryo felt! I had surgery, and I felt awful for days afterwards...Plus some of my friends asked me if I was anoerxic. All cuz I'm thin and practically a vegeration...
person Shinigami24
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I know how Ryo feel... When I had my wisdom teeth pulled out. It hurt like hell! Plus I threw up... WHen I'm sick, I have no appetite at all...People complain I'm too thin... I cannot help it if I cannot eat sometimes...
person Rain-chan
schedule October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THIS FIC N GET GETS OLD!!! ^_^ I wuv it to pieces! Off to go read more. GOD I MISSED YOUR FICS!
person DarkQueen
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH THAT IS THE MOST SWEET, SEXY, CUTE AND HOT STORY! I LOVE IT ^_^
person Yaky
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH GREAT KURA&RYOU FIC I LOVE IT even more because you added my 4 fav couples THANX although I expected more action from them but hey I LOVE IT!!!
person Chibi-Inu
schedule October 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O______O That has to be the sappiest sugary fic I have ever read...


... I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 IT WAS SO KAWAII AND CUTE!!!! NOT TO MENTION LIMEY AND LEMONY!!!!

^________^ See what happens when I get hyper?