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for The Dark Deal

by hatochiisai

person Sausweet
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dear God....that was a distubing story if i ever read ...s...so may pegasas stories out there lately, is this some sort of fad? I hope it passes because he creeps me out. Anyway, YOU'RE BACK!!! IVE MISSED YOU ;_; *SNIFFLE* welcome back and i hope you're happier real soon.
person C0nfus3d
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was evil pf pegasus and bakura argh i hate them! they took adavntage of poor lil ryou....but besides that that was extremely good, continue please
person Elle-Fate2x1
schedule October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, poor Ryou! that was sooo cruel of Bakura*glare* I am soooo mad at him. It was well written and I really enjoyed it!
person YamiKitsune
schedule October 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This was a good fic...not as good as your other ones, but it was still really good ^_^ I guess I am just used to Bakura also being a goodguy -_-'' ohe well! I STILL LIKE IT!!! ^_^