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for Tearing Down the Sky

by hatochiisai

person Malik the Psycho
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's the four high angels Michael, Gabriel, Uriel, Raphael right? ^_^
person DracOnyx
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now, let's just hope Keith doesn't manage to bugger things. As to my guess, the four are referring to the elements? Earth, Fire, Wind, Water? *shrugs* who knows . . . we shall see, I guess. Great chapter.

DracOnyx
person Lee
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing the Four has something to do with very high ranking angels. This story keeps getting more interesting as time, and chapters, go by. Thanks so much.
person icestar
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sheesh, how can someone who cant see kill another? and a healer in training! socrates oath anyone?

anyways, lovely chapter ^_^ :thumbs up:
person person
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You put Ryou in jail?!?!?! Grrrrr... I hate Keith. *mutters under breath* You had better make everything OK. *takes deep breath to calm down, and stalks away, muttering under her breath about 'too much damn mental stress' and 'where's my ice-cream...'*
person darknessmiko
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are the four angels from the main ones from god? You know Michael, Gabriel, Uriel, and Raphael...is that what you mean?

Laika de Lioncourt...always and forever Darknessmiko
person mofaf1
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Four?... I have three guesses (in order of likelihood)

1. could they be the four archangels in the Bible... Raphael, Gabriel, Michael and Uriel?

2. could they be the four archangels in the Koran... Jibraiil (Gabriel), Mika'il (Michael), Azrael (Raphael) and Israfel?

3. could they be ... Solomon, Pegasus, Raphael and Rashid?
person person
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* You killed Ryuuji! You're so _mean_! T_T But you've left me hanging for the next chappy too. So bring up the next chappy!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryuuji!! GAH! Keith MUST die!!!!!..slow and horrible...yes..very slowly....
person Malik the Psycho
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...*Sobs* Poor Ryuuji...*Gets out his scmitars and goes to hunt down Keith* that little FUCKER! Good job though..