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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!!!!! MUST KILL KEITH!!!!!!!
great chapter btw! ^^::
great chapter btw! ^^::
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah!! What a cliffie to leave it at! Evil person!! XD
Great job!! still loving the story!
Great job!! still loving the story!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dammit! Why did you have to stop it right when..... when everything was gonna happen!? UPDATE DAMN YOU!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Could the four refer to the four seraphim? The ones with six wings and lots of lots of eyes and always singing? Just guessing. Love your writing. Can`t wait for the next chapter, so don`t you dare stop! *warning glare*
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
or maybe you just mean the four main archangels gabriel, michael, and the other two with their mad names nobody can remember. Or maybe i should just give it up cuz i`m probably completly wrong.....
oh, one thing: Give Keith a really slow and really painfull death, or i swear i`ll go to hell personally and then....help him god...
oh, one thing: Give Keith a really slow and really painfull death, or i swear i`ll go to hell personally and then....help him god...
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great story and one of my favs. Please let Ryou get off, Keith is such an ass he's the only one who really belongs in hell (i was going to say Keith should go to hell but he's already there). Anyways as for the "Four" I can only think of two others besides the one u've already mentioned and they are Micheal (for sure) and I think Peter?? (just a guess) I should know the fourth one but my sunday school lessons are rusty, very rusty. Anyways please tell me who they are (cause it will bug me not to know) if not in the next chap then by the end of the story. I can hardly wait for the next update. keep up the good work
Cheers!!
P.S. something i just wanna mention (plz don't take offense), just some constructive criticism (i hope). anyways ur using too many commas in places where u don't need them and their butchering your sentences. try to watch out for that when ur writing and it also help to read over ur work (that can also apply to anything u write, not just fanfics)
Cheers!!
P.S. something i just wanna mention (plz don't take offense), just some constructive criticism (i hope). anyways ur using too many commas in places where u don't need them and their butchering your sentences. try to watch out for that when ur writing and it also help to read over ur work (that can also apply to anything u write, not just fanfics)
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your fic, it is quite well written.
would the four be the Elemental Angels rapheal, uriel, micheal, gabriel/jibrille?
would the four be the Elemental Angels rapheal, uriel, micheal, gabriel/jibrille?
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ This is the cutest story EVER!!!! I'm gonna start checking back everyday! ^_^ oh, btw. I think I know who 'the four' are. (I had to do a report for church school) You kinda gave it away when Ryou said "Raphael, why is this happening?!”
'The Four' would be the four archangels right? Um... Rahael, Gaberial,.... and two others I can't think of their names right now though.... I'm not sure if that was right or not. (I may just be over observant and think too much ^^;) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
'The Four' would be the four archangels right? Um... Rahael, Gaberial,.... and two others I can't think of their names right now though.... I'm not sure if that was right or not. (I may just be over observant and think too much ^^;) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is written very well. I believe the four refer to the four horesmen of the apocalypse.
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I know who The Four are! At least I'm petty sure . . . Michael, Gabriel, Uriel and Raphael. Hope I'm right . . .