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for Tearing Down the Sky

by hatochiisai

person Jessica
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.my.god. Hatochiisai, ...you absolutely take my breath away!...I just can't believe what a brilliant and talented author you are! The imagery and the plot is just unbelievable!...I'm so glad to finally meet the Four! I love how you made all of the demons squirm under the Arch Angels' interrogations! And I love how protective Bakura is over Ryou! What was Pegasus thinking?! He really is ignorant of demons if he thought he could take Bakura on, knowing he was in 'defensive mate' mode! There are little words I can say about this story other than that it is ~SOOOOOOOOOOOO~ GOOD! Can I kiss you?...o_o...can't wait until the battle scene! Oooooo, the anticipation! >_<
person Saka
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Great job so far. I love this story so much! Please you hafta update soon again. I just have to know what happens next. I hope keith gets it in the end after all the trouble he's caused. Stupid idiot! I hate that jerk >.< Anyways great job!! Can't wait more.

~IceAngel~
person ladywolfTerri
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Time for Keith to pay and in a big way!!!!
person ethereal
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter. I'm really curious to learn about the relationship between angles and demons. I hope Bakura-chan will be okay. Though quite frankly it was Pegasus fault. Can't wait for more!

Ethereal
person Silvershadowfire
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh... cool chapter! I'm glad that the demons weren't killed - please update when you can!
person Saka
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! You updated again! Awesome job with this fic. It's so wonderful that the angels 'n demons get to stay together. Now the only question...is Heaven ready for these three???

Anyways great job 'n update soon again!!

~IceAngel~
person Kenz
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey ^.^
thats cool....
I hadn't thought about it but.....you acutually did research didnt you?
person Saka
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* Oh my gooooooooooooooooood! This fic is just amazing. What will happen next?! Don't leave me in suspense. Are you goin to update soon again? Please do! I need to know what happens to Marik 'n Bakura 'n Yami.

And Keith....oh man what happens to him- I bet he isn't done yet....not when he sees Ryou's gone. Oh man update soon again! I hafta know what happens next!!!

~IceAngel~
person ethereal
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, they got out and Ryou and Bakura are both safe. I'm eager to see what happens now that they're in heaven. Please update soon, I love this story!

Ethereal
person ladywolfTerri
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! they made it!!! Now just need to kill Keith slowly, very slowly. maybe acid, one drop at a time?

Update soon please!!!!!