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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just went over the review list, and my friends /have/ been reading this -- Drac, I'm SO going to kill you for not telling me about it!!! Much love to you Hato-chiisai. ~LG
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What an ending! Shit. Don't Marik and Yami go through the same thing or not? I guess we'll never know. Anyway great ending, I loved it. Too bad it's over though, I enjoyed it. Will you write a sequel? Please consider it.
Yamisgirl13
Yamisgirl13
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God.
That..was..totally..and utterly..BEAUTIFUL! Oh, I truly expected a wonderful ending, but that was ~STUNNING!~...ABSOLUTELY, POSTIVELY BREATH-TAKING!
Thank you so much for sharing this with us! Though it had its angsty, torturous moments, it all ended beautifully! The entire journey was invigorating! I love how you never strayed from the point of the story...even with your minor hiatuses, you still managed to come back and hit it flawlessly every time, without missing a beat in the plotline! This will go as one of my all-time favorite Bakura/Ryou fanfics, heck even one of the best I've ever read! Great job! I can't wait to dive into more of your work!
Everything about the last chapter...I laughed, I cried, I smiled with envy and desire...it was, just, beautiful! (I know, my flexible vocabulary is envious to all, that's how much you've moved me with your story...there are no words...)...and the statement in which the Four recognize them as mates and welcome Bakura 'home'...very poignant. Made my heart all warm and tingly!...and great way to end the story, btw, with a steaming hot mating scene! Erotic and yet embracing the bonds which defines love!
Thank you again! ^-^
That..was..totally..and utterly..BEAUTIFUL! Oh, I truly expected a wonderful ending, but that was ~STUNNING!~...ABSOLUTELY, POSTIVELY BREATH-TAKING!
Thank you so much for sharing this with us! Though it had its angsty, torturous moments, it all ended beautifully! The entire journey was invigorating! I love how you never strayed from the point of the story...even with your minor hiatuses, you still managed to come back and hit it flawlessly every time, without missing a beat in the plotline! This will go as one of my all-time favorite Bakura/Ryou fanfics, heck even one of the best I've ever read! Great job! I can't wait to dive into more of your work!
Everything about the last chapter...I laughed, I cried, I smiled with envy and desire...it was, just, beautiful! (I know, my flexible vocabulary is envious to all, that's how much you've moved me with your story...there are no words...)...and the statement in which the Four recognize them as mates and welcome Bakura 'home'...very poignant. Made my heart all warm and tingly!...and great way to end the story, btw, with a steaming hot mating scene! Erotic and yet embracing the bonds which defines love!
Thank you again! ^-^
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*love and showers of adoration*
Gah, wonderful job, love.
This fic had me enthralled from the beginning, and all two years of stalking have paid off in surplus.
Amazing characterization, detail, and story line throughout it all.
I knew I loved you and your writing talent for a reason =D
Every emotion in the book was felt while reading this, and I'm more than satisfied with how this turned out.
Awesome job. *hearts*
~YRE
Gah, wonderful job, love.
This fic had me enthralled from the beginning, and all two years of stalking have paid off in surplus.
Amazing characterization, detail, and story line throughout it all.
I knew I loved you and your writing talent for a reason =D
Every emotion in the book was felt while reading this, and I'm more than satisfied with how this turned out.
Awesome job. *hearts*
~YRE
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... that was cute! The ending, was cute. The story was amazing. Graphic, but wonderful. You are an amazing author.
...now finish Burning Sea. I command you!
...now finish Burning Sea. I command you!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD XD XD XD XD XD
XD and then some. i'm so glad this is over! it was so good! >_< *thrashes in excitement* i'm terribly sad it's over too. *thrashes in sadness* as always, i enjoyed this fic very much and i wish to comment on your talent as a writer. you're talented. ^^ it's not only that, tho. you really add a personal edge to all of your stories which is refreshing to say the least. you really feel for the characters as you write them which makes the tale you weave all the more enjoyable. i really loved ever bit of this fic. the suspense in some chapters gave me a stomach ache. the more touching parts brought a tear to my eye. i never really knew what to expect each moment cuz this whole thing was so far from cliche. even my YGO apathetic friend thought the concept was brilliant. the definitions of the angels and demons as a species was a great idea that worked. the whole ryou smells like gardenias thing was really cute. ^_^ and the removable halo thing was a good idea, and the demon's tails, intergrating the stuff about the Angels of Araboth... EVERYTHING was freaking fantastic! i'll definitely have to read this again and i'll be sure to pimp you out to anyone who enjoys a good YGO fanfic. you've made me very happy. thank you.
^@^
XD and then some. i'm so glad this is over! it was so good! >_< *thrashes in excitement* i'm terribly sad it's over too. *thrashes in sadness* as always, i enjoyed this fic very much and i wish to comment on your talent as a writer. you're talented. ^^ it's not only that, tho. you really add a personal edge to all of your stories which is refreshing to say the least. you really feel for the characters as you write them which makes the tale you weave all the more enjoyable. i really loved ever bit of this fic. the suspense in some chapters gave me a stomach ache. the more touching parts brought a tear to my eye. i never really knew what to expect each moment cuz this whole thing was so far from cliche. even my YGO apathetic friend thought the concept was brilliant. the definitions of the angels and demons as a species was a great idea that worked. the whole ryou smells like gardenias thing was really cute. ^_^ and the removable halo thing was a good idea, and the demon's tails, intergrating the stuff about the Angels of Araboth... EVERYTHING was freaking fantastic! i'll definitely have to read this again and i'll be sure to pimp you out to anyone who enjoys a good YGO fanfic. you've made me very happy. thank you.
^@^
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I loved the whole thing, since there was obviously alot of thought gone into this, and it's one of the few fanfics, that I truely enjoyed. Love the ending.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe its over!!!! It was all wonderful and I hate to see it end. But you did a wonderful job with even the ending!! Great job, I can't wait to see what you come out with next!
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your imagination and writting skills produced a wondeful story with intriguing plot and good characterisation. It was a pleasure to read it.
Thank You very much.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
........wow..... ive been reading sinces all the way back at ch.7,( i dont review till a story is over normaly) .....wow.... i loved this story....wow....... You know u even had me afraid to read it for a wile cause of the trial and beheading chapters......wow......I even almost cried when u put up the note at the bottom about not posting over the summer cause ur mom was always watching you.....wow....... can i just say wow..... i waited for the end for so long and now its here......wow..... and now im going to cry! i dont want it to be over, but i guess it is, and still..... WOW.....