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for Tearing Down the Sky

by hatochiisai

person LariaKaiba
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My God! It's been so long since I've read this story. I missed it, this is one of my favorites. I hope you get it all posted up soon. I never got to read the ending of it.

~Laria K.
person Terri
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really great story!!! I have been waiting for an update!! I hope the next update comes soon! PLEASE!!!
person RavenRae and her cursed yami, Noroi
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RR: try checking up your symbol programming, it controls the out come of all text that is typed including giving you the ability to chose the e with an accent of the top or even real roman nume
YN
YN: raven has screwed with our school's program to many times to nhat hat that's what is up!
RR: I do not, you do, punk yami! (blows rasberries at YN :P) If it's not that your letters and signs are switched around, then nither one of us knows.
YN you might want to talk to a real techchy
(RR: someone that actually knows a computer inside and out in programs and works)
YN: anyway love, the story and hope to read more of it> >:)
person ShadowWolfGirl
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why won't you updateee????? I love this story but there's no onther chapter! @_@ I wanna see what happens to Ryou! O_O *gasp gasp*
person Terri
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I w3ant to know what happens next!!!!!..PLEASE continue this story!!..oh..and get a little Malik/Marik action in please!!..^_^.
person Nova Alexandrea
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeahhhhhhhhhh. You' re reposting. So sorry about it being taken off of Fanfiction. As I said in your last chapter, while I am not big into yaoi, I love your story. The astonishment of the story line allows me to overlook or see past it. It is a very orignial piece of work. Can't wait for when you catch up where you left off.
person kaminari
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, this is a really good start. I read your story on ff.net, but i think they took it down, damn them! but anyway, can you post more on here? please?
person Dark-angel302
schedule August 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!!! This story so rocks. You doing a really good job on it. (Although I was reading it over at ff.net so I know what happens. ^^) Please continue soon!!!!!
person Aramis
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was really worried when this story disapeared form ff, and I wasn't even sure if I remebered the title right... I asked in my profil if people know were I can still find it...
Love it, I hope you'll add the other chapters soon, I want to read them again (and this time I'll print them!)! Oh, and I can imagine Angel-Ryou very good, no wonder that Demon-Bakura wants to keep him...
person loner
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! I hope you didn't abandon it, it's been awhile... Maybe you could update soon???