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for Tearing Down the Sky

by hatochiisai

person DracOnyx
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're going to end up killing me, you know that? Please update soon!!!!

DracOnyx
person person
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Muwahahahaha. Great chapter, truly brilliant. ^_^ And how come I get the feeling that Malik is gonna be kind of pissed at Marik for not telling him Ryou was alive?
person DracOnyx
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn Terri for getting me hooked . . . I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DracOnyx
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww..such fluffly, sweet, cuteness at the end!!! Kura all romantic and stuff..^^..great job! I was beginging to wonder what has been going on with the other, glad we get to find out! ummmm......>>....*whispers*..update soon?..pretty please
person ferocity
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good stufff!!! continue.
person ethereal
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful part. I truly love this story and I hope that you continue soon. I'm curious to see what happens with Ryou, Malik, and Yugi with regards to their demon counterparts. Will Joey and Otogi go to meet their counterparts too? This is such a wonderful story. It has a great plot and both believable and lovable characters. Please keep up the good work!
person Shadow
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE?!?!?!?! Grrrr!! *bursts into tears* Whhaaaa!! I want a BxR lemon! *sniffles*

Ok, i'm getting over it now. I'm confused, though. Are the pairings MxBxRxM, or is it BxR and MxM? I have no idea where it's all going. The scene that included Marik with Bakura and Ryou kinda confused me. Was god though. *evil grin*

*pokes you in the chest* Post more!!
person ladywolf_Terri
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*face fault..anime style*...what a place to leave it! wow are you evil!! XD Great chapter though so UPDATE SOON!!!! *chibieyes with huge tears and everything*
person Rachel Dracon
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I feel like we should see more of Malik though, before he sees Ryou again. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
person Reyn
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is totally awesome. Not only is it well-written for a angel/demon story, but its got the proper amount of humor and drama. I love the way you've made Marik. He's hilarious. Especially with the whole smelling thing. That's jest too funny. Keep up the awesome work and update soon!