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for Tearing Down the Sky

by hatochiisai

schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic it is one of my favs. Hte plot, the way the fic moves it's llike watching it on TV. Great Work!!
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories ive read in a while and ive only read two chapters...but its sort of hard to read cuz of all the @@ and stuff. But that's okay I absolutely love adore your story!

NOW I MUST READ MORE...MUAHAHAHA! :)
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just positivley amazing. It was such a wonderful story. The plot was brilliant! I love it. I wished that it would never end. I swear that was one of the best fanfics that i've ever read! EVER! I love you love you LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story as usual, I hope there may be a mating story *wiggles her eyebrows*
person ayan
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM

I've always fancied Angels and Demons it never crossed my mind to make the hikaris and yami like this. My friends (Hana and Xyran) and I used God/Goddesses, Demi-gods/goddesses, Angels and Demons on our original fics with Myoujin Lee's Ragnarok and Chrno Crusade crossovers. heheheh Always thought of the yamis as shinigami (angels of death) and the hikaris as well plain mortals. Infinite percent GREAT FANFIC! Ü
person Arya
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome the best fanfic i've ever read keept it up
person Yoru Hana
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, sweet! SO, did they get to keep thier tails? If they lost them I bet thier mates would be pretty disapointed, *snicker* but since you didn't say anything about the tails, only the wings and fire halo, I'll assume the got to keep them. Lovely!
person Yoru Hana
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One last comment. I wonder if Marik had the audasity to smell the Angel's of Abaroth.... *snickers at the mental image*
person Zoe
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story.
person LadyGrey
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII!!! Wow. You're up to Chapter 24, and for some reason, I hadn't started reading this until last week. And I'm kicking myself now. Although the nice thing is I'm only dl'ing 5 chapters at a time to read at work so I'm stretching out my enjoyment, right now I'm up to 10! So, as I'm reading I'm writing a super long review in my head, mostly marking the passages that make me look like an idiot to my coworkers when I start laughing hysterically for no reason; I'll email it all to ya sometime, just know that I'm so loving this and hope you keep updating forever. And if I'm /not/ the last person to have read this, I'll get the word out to my friends too. Thank you for an awesome story, even my yami Trelane says she loves it! Ja! ~LG & Lanie