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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story,cant wait 2 c what happens next.
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this goddess is too lazy to log in lol ne who loved the story. you describe things very well ^_^ you don't need to worry about flames with that talent! ~bye bye
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big fan of Marik/Tea pairings. This one is, so far, is the best. I kinda feel sorry for Yami (I speak of the Pharaoh of course) but...whatever. Great story. Keep it up.
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
U should really add more to this story
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you make a chapter two because I've been waiting but you never put up a second chapter. I hope it's very soon
Ja Ne
Ja Ne
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ That was SO unbelievably good! Anzu is cool no matter what anyone says, I hate those who bash her. Please write more stories involving her, I'm sure they would all be as excellent as this one.
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is that flamer talking about! This story is excellent, you got the characters perfect and I bet Anzu is a lot more beautiful than him/her! Stupid, crappy Anzu haters. Why don't they just get over the fact that she's a NICE CHARACTER, simply CARES about her friends and has a GOOD HEART, which is a lot more than can be said about bashers -_-
Aaaaaaannnnny way, it was fantastic. Please do a second chap. I wanna see Yami squirm (Not that I hate him, just I like Marik better)
Lara
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing! Lol, I love it!
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i soooooooooooooooo loved!!!! I think you should make this into a chapter story or at least have a sequel about it. I can't belive you got a flame for this. yes Anzu is that buiteful, yes Y.Marik is toyaly in chacter, and what ever type of plot you have is grate!!! I think this is the best story I've read on this sight and you are a five star writer!!! So screw anyone who dosen't like it cause this is the greatest story ever!!! Go you!!!
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was humm........ that was hummm..... I don't know. You should write a sequel, when the pharaoh finds them together, I want to see his face and what he's gonna do. I hope you don't make the pharaoh to weak at this and make him really strong, but a little heartbreaked could be just fine.