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for Sweet Release

by Aten

person Ryou\'sMistress265
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... anyone i want huh. well since rthe last one was interesting lets see how a RyouxYugi will turn out.
person thegorgonmedusa
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think that Yugi and or or which ever of the two is going to use their bodies should wear a mask or something that alters their appearance a little so that who ever it is doesnt know who it actuall is, like with Seto cause he'd probably tell Yami or something.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait to see what's next!:-)
Don't forget the fuzzy handcuffs! *grin*
person dragonkitty
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY u updated!! I have an idea how about Jounouchi and Ryou in a BDMS sitch. Yeah okay. I love your story it's so sad
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to see Otogi x Yugi BDSM! I think it would be great! ^.^
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Keith x Yugi (BSDM)
DD: Keith x Ryou (BSDM)
person Smurf Cat
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fic. i really like the pairing. ^_^ i've been looking for a malik/yami but a malik/yugi is just as good. you portraty the characters very well and are an excellent writer. the only downside is that you haven't used spacing in your fic. i would suggest uploading it in txt format if you want spaces between paragraphs. i like the lemons even if i'm not really used to yaoi lemons yet...

I LOVE MALIK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE'S MINE!!!!

~Smurf Cat
person Dragonkitty
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It's so like sad and i hope they have freedom and a happy ending
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: Geeze! Yami is SUCH a dick!!
YD: Poor Malik...the worst thing is...I KNOW where this is going!!
DD: Shhh...Dragon, don't ruin it the the other readers!!
YD: But...but ...I should give them fair warning.
DD: *grabs rope* Wanna help, baby?
person silent angel
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet i really liked it and i dont useally like non yy/y b/r m/m but i liked that! keep it up!