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for Sweet Release

by Aten

person star fire
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this is a greeat storie . Are you going to have seto or joey in it are you going to have the yamis start to go lookkking forthem i hope you get all three of them to start looking that would be cool please uup dat soon
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What's up? Keep updating for my sake! The good Marik or Malik whichever the one is has to get over the cold! Don't let him die! That's my baby!
Marik: *Stands up and hugs her* please update. This girl's gonna pitch a fit.
Malik: Why did I beat you in the beginning?
Marik: It's part of the story. You never laid a hand on me.
Malik: Oh.
Yugi: Help us out and UPDATE!
CAF1: Thanks, guys. Like they said, update for us! *SNIFF*
person KayElena
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like your story. Please give us more soon! ;-)
person MarikIshtar77
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ouch! Great Yugi x Pegasus NCS!!!!! Is Malik ever going to get better?
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: *giggle* Max is so...
DD: Insane!
YD: That was NOT the word I was looking for.
DD: How about sick.
YD: That wasn't it either...umm...oh yeah, COOL!
DD: *rools eyes* You're twisted.
YD: Thank you for the wonderful compliment!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Things hafta get better for them soon! It's really not looking good for Malik. Oy. Pegasus is still as evil as ever, but I don't know how he could think that Yugi told Bakura to do what he did. Ahh...well!! Update soon!!

Lady Elfskye
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOh, hard descision here! I know, here's an idea; Pegasus playing "doctor* with Yugi. I'm willing to bet being as rich as Pegasus is, he'd have all kinds of kinky aparatus's in that big mansion of his!
Great Chapter! Keith's a meany!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: *gags*
DD: *runs from room retching*
YD: Ummm...pairings. How about a little comfort after that? Like Joey with Yugi and Tris with Ryou? Foursome maybe? Excuse me...I have to go throw up now.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you trying to drive me crazy????? You're right, Keith does make a good bad guy. Damn! Anyways...hmm, I don like Joey to be a bad guy. So, Pegasus and Ryou. Or Yugi. Hmmm...definately the first.

Lady Elfskye
Short and sweet cause I am still reading from the library.
person Sweetcandie
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this fic. Nice work on it. You still taking request for the lemons? I would really like to see a Pegasus one, it doesn't matter with who. I don't see much of him on this site , but he happens to be my favorite character. I don't think that he should be unnecessarily cruel or anything you know? I don't even care what type of plot it has, so have fun.