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for Sweet Release

by Aten

person ShadowofLight
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man won't they ever get a break?!? Geez, and what's gonna happen when Tristen and Joey find out the guys are alive? WHat if hey jsut destroy their items wiht the yamis inside, that way they woin't have to be living int eh shadows? Man this story is murder... more pleaze!
person Shadow
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! POOR RYOU SETO IS A BASTARD!!!
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hugs Ryou plushie* Oh Ryou! I wish I can show you love! If only you weren't a non-existing gay bishounen anime character in a AU fanfic!! DARN REALITY!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!
person Dragondreamer Yami DrK¨ ß
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: HELL! That was HOT!
YD: And Seto was watching...gods...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
person MoztartzBallad
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
@_@ aw man!!! this story gets better and better. Now even more interesting. I'm wondering what Seto has plans for the boys.

I have one question, Oo please don't yell at me! I remember reading about there was a news report announcing about Yugi, Ryou, and Malik's death and about their funeral session. Even though now they are back to life, which I'm glad you brought them back to life and made the story even MORE darker and cooler too, wouldn't Seto have heard of their deaths? I' I'm surprised he didn't really react much about seeing that Yugi, Ryou, and Malik are still alive.

Thats my only question for this fic so far. But, other than that, oh my god, I really look forward to the next chapter. Please continue! and update soon!

MoztarzBallad
person Hitomi No Ryu
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I said before and I'll say it again...SADIST!! DIRTY-MINDED SADIST!!
person Star
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this ood ood the lliving dead . poor hikkri'sI hope seto want be a jerk. I see yami has his on form of abuse its mental just as bad,
person crazieanimefan1
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kaiba better help them. I'm like MarikIshtar77 in this. I feel like I've been here before. But it's still a great fic! Continue updating and I can't wait to see if the three actually can be free! (hint, Tristan *cough, cough* Ryou)
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG *jaw drops* What the hell is wrong with Yami? He is a F**King ASSHOLE! Poor Yugi. God make sure Yami gets slapped or something. Sure giving Yugi icecream can be sweet, but talking to Yugi like he's a kid and using him. GRRRRRR I Love them as a pair, but in this fic I want to see Yugi happy. Update loving it so much.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dejavu? I feel like I've been here before......hikari's running away.....hmm....maybe I'm wrong. LOL Cool chapter!